Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

The Battles Rages

Rick Zablocki Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Battles Rages which was written by poet Rick Zablocki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Rick Zablocki

Best Rick Zablocki Poems

+ Fav Poet

The Battles Rages

The Battle Rages

the battle rages on and on
the war of nerves has just begun
another pill to make me numb
i am not one, i am not one

to be pulled like i'm on a rack
depression needs to now fall back
support will get me back on track
i'm not a quack, i'm not a quack

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 1:59:00 PM

    Good stuff Rick, I have never had depression, but now I know what it feels like, well done....Peter

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Congrats In Kim's "Monotetra" contest....take care...LINDA

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 8:25:00 PM

    Intriqueing. Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:01:00 PM

    Rick, congrats on your win with this emotion packed write! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:00:00 PM

    powerful write, my friend - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:02:00 AM

    Good descriptions of the battles waged by depression. Liked it a lot.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 6:01:00 AM

    I really enjoyed reading your awesome monotetra that you have expressed so eloquently here this morning my friend! This is a tremendous write on depression and all that it encompasses! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!