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Waltztime - Dance with contest

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Waltztime - Dance with contest

Was walking across the golden sands
Could hear music on the breeze
Eyes closed and with  shoes in hand
I waltzed across the sand with ease

Such fancy steps when i suddenly found 
What felt like strong hands holding mine
Fred Astaire was leading me around
I was dancing in the film Swing Time.

I whisked and chassis'd  like a pro
I turned at the corners as i should
My legs knew just where to go
My heart beat with heavy thud.

The music ended I opened my eyes
I was all alone on that sandy shore
I looked down to my surprise
On my feet were the dance shoes I wore

Now when I am lonely, I close my eyes
To return to that glorious day
When all alone i walked the sand
that wonderful moment i can never repay


Penned 28 June 2013







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  1. Date: 7/17/2013 10:39:00 PM

    Beautiful and full of lovely images. Many warm congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 6:16:00 PM

    Seren, this is delightful! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:23:00 PM

    Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 4:14:00 PM

    Seren, Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 1:41:00 PM

    LOVE this gem Seren, especially line three of the first verse....I can easily picture that...I live in south Louisianne and love watching Cajun couples waltz...They literally glide across the floor as if they are ice skating...A beautiful sight to behold...Congratulations - Tim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/17/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Tim, I love dancing...Seren
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 6:46:00 AM

    wonderful write Seren.....congrats on your win

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/17/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Joseph ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 1:29:00 PM

    dreamy kind of a spin... i waltz with you along melodious lines.. beautiful, seren...:) huggs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 6/28/2013 7:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Nette, thanks for your kind words ....Seren
  1. Date: 6/27/2013 10:44:00 PM

    i really loved this write my friend! You have successfully enchanted me with your words from this elaborate poem! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a fun and wondrous poem, Great work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 6/28/2013 7:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Russell, thanks my friend ...Seren