Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

Curiosity

david scott Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Curiosity which was written by poet david scott. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by david scott

Best David Scott Poems

+ Fav Poet

Curiosity

Still at times I can be an adolescent, a bit of a brat
I'm always questioning things, though I'm suspicious
I admit there's time's I've been ignorant to even chat
Yeah quit a lot of the time I've been quite obnoxious

A mr know it all! but at the time it seemed ludicrous
Like the magician, trying to pull a trick out of the hat
And getting everyone to say the words hocus pocus                                            
But me thinking wise to it all one can smell a dirty rat    

Then things I suppose at times are so blatantly obvious
Some could say your either death or just blind as a bat
But back then I was a little immature, as to it all oblivious                        
Still inquisitive though I'm now older, a lot less of a prat

And still I'm no real master mind, I'm not any genius
Why this is this, I ask and that always has to be that??
Why something’s are not always, leaves one curious
Though I was told it was curiosity that killed the cat

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,




NOTE TO READERS AGAIN LIKE INTERWISON AND FATE JUST
tweaked a few  lines which I felt made better sense was originally going to add two extra verses
but decided to take some words lines from extra two and rewrite first two verses

in better context I don’t know

again some inspiration fro all the cool soup poets thank you..............XXX

 ADDIN A LITTLE ON END
NOT SURE IF NEEDED TO OUR OF INSPERATION RIGHT NOW

SOUNDS STUPID I KNOW MAKES NO SENSE JSUT GOING THROUGH MY HEAD
DEEP IN THOUGHT WHILE REWORKING OTHERS ID WROTE
THIS POPED UP IN THE SAME VANE AS FATE SAME SOR OF PATTERN AND IDEA
WITH THIS iM OBVISLY MORE KNOWLGABLE NOW THAN WHEN YOUNGER
BUTSTILL I QUESTION A LOT OF THINGS WITH THIS TRYING TO ADD A LITTLE HUMOUR ALSO
INSPIERD BY all the so cool poet members of the soup if I had never come on this site
i would never have updated a lot of my old stuff or even wrote any of the thirty new writes 
ive wrote over the past year of being on here THANKYOU FOR YOUR INSPERATION AND COMMNETS
MAKES ME FEEL APART OF SOMETHING    XXXXXXXXXXXXXX THOUGHTS FEELINGS WORDS WITH MEANINGS





Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 8:18:00 PM

    Very nice edit. I liked reading this one! Your personality really shines in this one. :D Always, Laura

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 1:10:00 PM

    David I enjoyed the question you bring forth in this write of yours ;) enjoyed reading it tonight

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:19:00 PM

    I was wondering if this one was related to the last poem I read... thank you for the note above.. love the way you end the poem above... and the famous quote "curiosity killed the cat...'' lol for all the nose-yyyss xox~ LINDA