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Autumns Birth

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Autumns Birth

Born on an autumns day 

Blue skies and butterflies

Leaves falling to the ground  

Hold me under water 

Teach me how to pray

Then I'll be on my way

As I lay here in my grave 

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 3:00:00 PM

    I love the metaphoric writing in this poem nicely done poet

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 6:16:00 AM

    Debbie, thank you for your comment. I know that you are truthful--it is the politicians who are dishonest. Your poem above fooled me at first. I thought it might be about earthworms until I came to the last line. This twist in short verse takes an educational turn. It is tough to think about our demise, but you bring it forward in a beautiful way that puts life in a natural perspective. We can only hope that our offspring with thrive at least for a while without us.

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 6:49:00 PM

    The season's come and go.Each is born and then each dies only to become the circle of life. Nicely done. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 5:55:00 PM

    'Teach me how to pray' indeed Debbie!...VERY nice verse - Tim

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Autumn can birth some great things in our lives that Spring and Summer could not give..Winter has its own rewards..Enjoyed reading your very creative and unique work.Sara

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 7:59:00 AM

    As one season dies another is born ...nicely penned Debbie....thanks for stopping by

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Debbie, picturing birth, baptism and death in an elegant setting . So serene!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 1:29:00 AM

    this is very nice. I really like it!

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 6:59:00 PM

    I know my seventy years have gone like a rocket. But when looked at wthout fear, death is a good friend, I loved your words Debbie.Thank you

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 5:58:00 PM

    birth and death revolving on the wheel, how soon the time is passing quick, so passionate we dance the reel, cos death does come again to steal, time & again to cross, recross the styx.... unreal...deal ...betwixt... again the spirit deal.. till babe in arms returns, the wheel is fixed. Don re: Debbie Duncan "Autumns Birth"

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 11:26:00 AM

    The mingling of nature,faith and beauty made the last line seem natural after the initial shock of it. A profound little gem. SuZ

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 11:21:00 PM

    Ok, I did not expect that twist of an ending. Fantastic job!

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:48:00 PM

    Wow Debbie, this is amazing. The title alone caught my eye and then the rest of the poem was also a gem. You know me and nature? lol Hugs and love, Gail