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  1. Date: 7/13/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Hauntingly beautiful....Naked truths are sometimes so painful that we cover them up for self preservation. That's it, Craig....into my favorite poet file with ya!

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 7:00:00 AM
    I see you are no stranger to lyric writing. Our themes tell me we write with the same ink... This is excellent writing.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 11:20:00 PM
    Polish these lines and you could end-up with some very smooth lyrics. That is the naked truth. Another naked truth: I realize that you probably aren't a hockey fan, but I am glad the Bruins didn't win the Cup this year. Hey, they won it only 2 years ago. That's enough lol. The Bruins played some good hockey, especially when they swept Pittsburgh in the 3rd round of the SCP, so kudos to them. When I was young, I had a soft spot for the Hartford Whalers though, but the team disbanded from the NHL.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:02:00 AM
    I llove your unfimished lyrics Craig..They seem quite finished to me..They re heard so loudly from the inner cry of your soul..I guess we all yearn for yesterday ..We all have happy memories but even regrets..I love the way you described the blanket to shelter pain.I can relate that..a blanket for comfort.Somehow sad..but for me sad poems are the most beautiful-a favourite.

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 6/26/2013 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Relate to that..grr typo : )
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 4:34:00 PM
    This is a great poem! I really like what you said and how you said it. Excellent work.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 3:09:00 PM
    beautiful song that deserves being finished Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 1:54:00 PM
    Very good poem.