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The Changing Sky - contest

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The Changing Sky - contest

Stand still, look to the skies
every second the pattern changes,
watch the clouds sail past
being blown by the winds of time.

Colours change, from the dark 
cloudless sky with stars atwinkling,
to a sky of clouds, wind making leaves
tumble and fall to the ground.

Morning breaks with a sky of red and orangy hues,
lighting up a warning to one and all,
dark rain clouds will soon be here
to dampen the ardour of any love bird.

Blue skies are shouting come outside
I am warm to your skin, will rejuvenate your soul,
I am life to all, come its fun to play ,
to run in the sun , 
until it sets, back, into its fiery hues.

Now close your eyes you will have
visions to hold in your minds eye
memories to savour all your life.
The ever changing sky.

penned  June 24 2013

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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Congrats on your very descriptive winning work..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/26/2013 12:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara ....Seren
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:51:00 PM
    SEREN, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/25/2013 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SKAT ...Seren
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:13:00 PM
    So very lovely..congrats..BG

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/25/2013 12:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Barbara ..Seren
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:11:00 PM
    Congrats Seren on your winning poem xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/25/2013 12:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Rose many thanks...Seren
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Impressive! Congratulations!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/25/2013 12:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Isaiah .....Seren
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:59:00 PM
    Seren congratulations on your fantastic win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/25/2013 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Connie,many thanks ..Seren
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Love the ever changing skies. Nicely described in your poem. love phyl

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/26/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Phyllis ....Seren
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:53:00 AM
    Well done you should do well with this gem.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/25/2013 1:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard...Seren
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:52:00 AM
    well described you have captured the spirit of sky in this gl in contest Shadow x smiles

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/25/2013 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shadow or your kind words ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:35:00 AM
    This is is perfect rendition of an ever changing sky my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a delightful piece, an outstanding poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/25/2013 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell ...Seren