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Red Sun

Rising sun so soft,tender like your forehead's red bindi splashes colour in my mind another new dawn. =========000========== Contest name--Red Sun Date--- 24th June 2013
Bindi--A bindi ( Sanskrit bindu, meaning "a drop, small particle, dot"), or a pottu/bottu (in Tamil, Telugu, and Malayalam) is a forehead decoration worn in South Asia (particularly India, Pakistan, Bangladesh, Nepal, Sri Lanka and Mauritius) [1] and Southeast Asia. Traditionally it is a bright dot of red color applied in the center of the forehead close to the eyebrows, but it can also consist of a sign or piece of jewelry worn at this location.

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  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:32:00 AM

    Well done here Kash,,,, tender imagery... soup mail... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 11:12:00 AM

    Kash, is this not on the list? I see no congrats here. Good grief. this is OUTSTANDING metaphor and imagery.

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 3:05:00 PM

    A great amalgam of your culture, Kash..well penned! ~Shirley

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 1:10:00 PM

    hi there, kashi... your muse is waking you up!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 4:12:00 PM

    - Beautiful sun image, Kash! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 11:00:00 AM

    hellllo and huggggs, kashi!...:)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 6:38:00 AM

    Beautifully crafted Kash.Well done on all counts.Just wonderful!

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 12:59:00 PM

    thanks for coming around, kashi... happy saturday!..:)

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 8:25:00 AM

    where are you keeping your new poems?... miss them, kashi.. TGIF, woohoo!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:42:00 AM

    soupy, yeah!..:)

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 1:18:00 PM

    This is so sweet. I'm glad that you explained what a bindi is. Thank you for sharing and good luck in contest..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 12:04:00 PM

    how are you, kashi?... :) huggs

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:37:00 AM

    Excellent. Beautifully said. Tfs

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 10:50:00 AM

    the code meant that i miss your poetry.. go and do a new one, kashi.... :) huggs

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:01:00 PM

    love this, Kash, and enjoyed the footnotes too - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Hi Kash.........soup reply on its way !!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 11:56:00 AM

    I've read a scientific reason behind the application of tika or bindi at the spot between eyebrows. when the spot is pressed with the finger during application it retains energy and strengthens concentration. hello fellow Indian! its great amalgam of culture and new dawn!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 1:50:00 PM

    gwe76*^----:) figure this code out, lol.... hello and hugggs, kashi!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 5:53:00 AM

    So very beautiful Kash..Tnks for the info Kash.re 'the bindi'..Sometimes i saw tourists on my island..yep usually from India i guess and i saw that dot..tnks to you i know what its called now.I love learning about other cultures.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 12:44:00 AM

    hi, there, Kash, just checking in on you!!

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 12:05:00 PM

    kashi, come out, come out.. wherever you are!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:25:00 AM

    I love this......a unique twist you have given nature, and a touch of the culture that many of us love and admire. I too, have often wondered what to call that small dot....now I know! Thanks for this beautiful little poem!

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:00:00 AM

    Nice imagery adorned with beautiful words.Thanks my friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 9:36:00 AM

    I like your comparison to that red spot I have seen in pictures. I have often wondered what it was called. Good luck. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 7:39:00 AM

    nicely penned Kash...best wishes in the contest

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 6:30:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading the explanation for your poem. It explains your poem well. An excellent poem. Thanks for sharing. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:24:00 PM

    Nicely done

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:52:00 PM

    Kash, Your descriptions are fantastic and writing serene. :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:24:00 PM

    Short, sweet, and brilliant! Thank you for visiting my poetry.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Kash, I wrote mine backwards 5/7/7/7/so now I tried to fix it and I am not crazy about it. Also I used many of the same lines from a tanka I once did. I hope to make mine more original like yours is. I just love the bindi idea in yours.

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