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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Im just enjoying this beauty zmsrlon..Reminded me of one of my fsvourite movies 'ghost'.d..yet this goes even deeper-the circ of love and God s blessings.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 9:56:00 PM

    Hi tnks for your lovely comment.I was very shy..but its the closest to soupers i can get : ).Its my second time hearing you Sxribe which is awesome.Hope we ll keep on hearing you there : ).on other following shows.

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 6:00:00 PM

    Intricately weaved, beautiful stanzas and imagery of 4 hands "creating a womb for love to grow" Stunning work, going in my faves :)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:40:00 PM

    a wonderful poem Scribe, I love the way you painted the dedication, and the one appreciating above... SKAT, from the land of OZ <---- lol

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:29:00 AM

    What a wonderful poem to dedicate to marriage, faithfulness, love and respect. I can tell they have earned such beautiful words. :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:52:00 AM

    Hi marlon captivating stuff. Thanx for stoping by earlier. good to see you writing such fine work. *smiles* Ron

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:58:00 PM

    Hi Marlon! I read this beautiful work, and I think how well you describe the union of soulmates for life...."Intricately weaving vows into the fiber of its being"..... magical line! my friend! jimbo

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:22:00 AM

    This is a very beautiful dedication to your friends. They will sure love it. Thanks for sharing...... lucilla

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:27:00 AM

    Oh my god lol we both comments on one another poem at the same time. how creepy is that.... . I'm awake because my crazy sister called me about an hour and a half ago.... lol

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:53:00 AM

    a must-read, scribe and a real winner up there... sweet congrats!..:)

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 7/16/2013 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    feel-so-good to hear you on drake's show!... a redeeming poem!..:)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:37:00 AM

    Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 7/14/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda!
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 11:42:00 AM

    Love the words you wrote in this beautifully put great job have a wonderful day

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 2:25:00 PM

    Thanks for kind words! Marlon! will listen for you next tues!....james marshall goff .....aka jimbo!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:45:00 PM

    This is the first poem I have read on the Soup in the past couple months- couldn't have picked a better one to read! ;) The way you write always leaves me so damn inspired! You are an astonishingly good poet, my friend. Always a pleasure to stop by and read your work. :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 7/9/2013 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the huge compliment! Wow...
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 7:06:00 AM

    i heard you read your poem on Drake's show...Please shoot me a soup mail and tell me the title...I remember you saying something like you freed her soul and freed your own in the process...You sound and talk exactly like I pictured and the lady named Epiphamy(?) that followed you was a freekin hoot! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 11:48:00 PM

    Scribe, I am broken by guilt.. ... I hate myself for not accepting her condition at an early stage... and not visiting enough. I would randomly go over and walk away with tears always... when i finally got around to accepting ... now she is gone... were's the irony in that? ps... thank you for reading my poem.. the first poem I wrote was brutal, and took me lower than low... that's my rated PG 13 post for the soup... LOVE LINDA

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 3:32:00 PM

    This is beautiful! Good to read you again, Marlon...

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 7:24:00 PM

    'Creating the womb for love to grow unconditionally'...The only kind of love that matters...Did you read this at their wedding?...Hope so!...Thanks for this Marlon - Tim

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 10:15:00 AM

    This is indeed an excellent work of art my dear friend Scribe! I love it soo much! Im sure your friends will love this so much & treasure this gem of yours. While reading your poem, it reminds me also of one of my favorite movies & it's theme song (my fav. piano piece) Unchained Melody. An outstanding poem/dedication indeed! I'll fave this if you don't mind. Thanks for sharing & your nice comments on my poem. More blessings! love lots, Leonora

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 7/3/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Leonora! Fav away my dear poet!
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 8:58:00 AM

    Your friends must have been honoured to have such words of beauty dedicated to them. Terrific write! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 7:55:00 AM

    Marlon.....had to stop by and read this art line by line! metaphors work miracles here! beautiful verse! and last nite on the were on fire! jimbo

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 7/3/2013 6:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks poet, but you burned the house down also... I was loving it!
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 2:24:00 PM

    This is beautiful and smart! I love it! Such excellent work.

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:53:00 AM

    a beautiful marriage tribute, Marlon. Hey, I've missed you, where have you been? love and hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:22:00 PM

    You get a 7 for this one. Great poetry here that I enjoyed reading this afternoon. Thanks for sharing and for reading 9 Words To Remember. ) Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Vehement imagery that paints a beautiful imagery for the mind.Loved this!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/30/2013 11:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the kind words!
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:14:00 PM

    Great work honoring friends?..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, disipline has to be done properly or the child can have permanent negative memories about childhood and people..My ex-son-in-law wept bitterly when his grandmother died so he was not harmed by the discipline but sometimes it does do harm..I remember having to go get the switch..What child can get a large switch anyway?..Of course, some children who think they are playing it smart get the small ones ...Sara

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/29/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes it is for my friends. Thanks for the kind words Sara!
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:51:00 PM

    This is awesome in its flow and imagery.....touches on a visceral level... SuZ

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/29/2013 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, it is appreciated!
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:58:00 PM

    An exquisite piece of work. Well done on your wonderful quill Scribe. AO

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/29/2013 6:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks poet!
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:52:00 PM

    So very beautiful..What a dedication..indeed a gem.I love your faith

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/29/2013 6:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind words!
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 12:42:00 AM

    This poem is a beautiful work of art. It is full of symbol and imagery. "shaping love into spiritual dialect intended for hearts to converse." Very beautiful line

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/29/2013 5:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/29/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you got your kind words!