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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Im just enjoying this beauty zmsrlon..Reminded me of one of my fsvourite movies 'ghost'.d..yet this goes even deeper-the circ of love and God s blessings.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 9:56:00 PM
    Hi tnks for your lovely comment.I was very shy..but its the closest to soupers i can get : ).Its my second time hearing you Sxribe which is awesome.Hope we ll keep on hearing you there : ).on other following shows.

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Intricately weaved, beautiful stanzas and imagery of 4 hands "creating a womb for love to grow" Stunning work, going in my faves :)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:40:00 PM
    a wonderful poem Scribe, I love the way you painted the dedication, and the one appreciating above... SKAT, from the land of OZ <---- lol

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:29:00 AM
    What a wonderful poem to dedicate to marriage, faithfulness, love and respect. I can tell they have earned such beautiful words. :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:52:00 AM
    Hi marlon captivating stuff. Thanx for stoping by earlier. good to see you writing such fine work. *smiles* Ron

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Hi Marlon! I read this beautiful work, and I think how well you describe the union of soulmates for life...."Intricately weaving vows into the fiber of its being"..... magical line! my friend! jimbo

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:22:00 AM
    This is a very beautiful dedication to your friends. They will sure love it. Thanks for sharing...... lucilla

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:27:00 AM
    Oh my god lol we both comments on one another poem at the same time. how creepy is that.... . I'm awake because my crazy sister called me about an hour and a half ago.... lol

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:53:00 AM
    a must-read, scribe and a real winner up there... sweet congrats!..:)

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    Date: 7/16/2013 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    feel-so-good to hear you on drake's show!... a redeeming poem!..:)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:37:00 AM
    Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Love the words you wrote in this beautifully put great job have a wonderful day

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 2:25:00 PM
    Thanks for kind words! Marlon! will listen for you next tues!....james marshall goff .....aka jimbo!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:45:00 PM
    This is the first poem I have read on the Soup in the past couple months- couldn't have picked a better one to read! ;) The way you write always leaves me so damn inspired! You are an astonishingly good poet, my friend. Always a pleasure to stop by and read your work. :)

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 7:06:00 AM
    i heard you read your poem on Drake's show...Please shoot me a soup mail and tell me the title...I remember you saying something like you freed her soul and freed your own in the process...You sound and talk exactly like I pictured and the lady named Epiphamy(?) that followed you was a freekin hoot! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 11:48:00 PM
    Scribe, I am broken by guilt.. ... I hate myself for not accepting her condition at an early stage... and not visiting enough. I would randomly go over and walk away with tears always... when i finally got around to accepting ... now she is gone... were's the irony in that? ps... thank you for reading my poem.. the first poem I wrote was brutal, and took me lower than low... that's my rated PG 13 post for the soup... LOVE LINDA

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 3:32:00 PM
    This is beautiful! Good to read you again, Marlon...

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 7:24:00 PM
    'Creating the womb for love to grow unconditionally'...The only kind of love that matters...Did you read this at their wedding?...Hope so!...Thanks for this Marlon - Tim

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 10:15:00 AM
    This is indeed an excellent work of art my dear friend Scribe! I love it soo much! Im sure your friends will love this so much & treasure this gem of yours. While reading your poem, it reminds me also of one of my favorite movies & it's theme song (my fav. piano piece) Unchained Melody. An outstanding poem/dedication indeed! I'll fave this if you don't mind. Thanks for sharing & your nice comments on my poem. More blessings! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Your friends must have been honoured to have such words of beauty dedicated to them. Terrific write! Hugs