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LONGING FOR FATHER'S LOVE

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LONGING FOR FATHER'S LOVE

I am not a father
Nor I am a mother
I am just a daughter
That is growing better...

Father, you have been away
I truly wish you have stayed
Hugging me as I lay
I don't need much penny...

All I have been missing is you my daddy
Your love and your real company...

Look, how I am now
I pursued my little vow
Hoping always, You'll be proud
It's alright if you'll not be loud...

All I want is for us to bond...

Yes, I am neither a kid nor a child
Ever anymore
But still, there is that longing
I cannot deny...

I miss you much, daddy...

(c) 
olive_eloisa

contest: POEM FOR DADDY
SPONSOR: LEONORA GALINTA
2ND PLACE - TO GOD BE THE GREATEST GLORY...
NOTE: I REALLY MISS A FATHER'S LOVE..

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  1. Date: 5/26/2014 7:02:00 PM
    Hi Olive, a sensitive, emotional write my friend. You lead us along through your piece, your words tyouching our hearts, feeling the emotions you put Into your write. THis Is a well written piece that can touch everyone. Congratulations on your win. I send you kisses and hugs with this comment my friend. I wish you did not have to miss a fathers Love. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/27/2014 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, Mike that I wish too.. :) each time I read this still same feelings it aroused in me.. as truly I miss my father much..... years gone by will never return.. and now am away from them.. i love them both.. :) thanks for the drop by..
  1. Date: 3/14/2014 1:43:00 AM
    Olive, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/27/2014 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Skat.. :) >> ;) weee, this a late thank you.. :)
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 10:47:00 PM
    Olive, tremendous tribute to your father. Congrats on your win!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/14/2014 12:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you.. :) to GOD be the glory as always.. :D
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 5:41:00 PM
    We never get too big for Daddy's hug. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/14/2014 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS JOYCE.. :) to GOd our greatest father be always the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 5:11:00 AM
    Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, olive

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/13/2014 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you sir.. to God be the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 3:16:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear friend olive . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/13/2014 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks so much.. :) to God always be the glory :)