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LONGING FOR FATHER'S LOVE

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LONGING FOR FATHER'S LOVE

I am not a father...
Nor I am a mother...
I am just a daughter...
That is growing better...

Father, you have been away...
I truly wish you have stayed...
Hugging me as I lay...
I don't need much penny...

All i have been missing is you my daddy..
Your love and your real company...

Look, how i am now...
I pursued my little vow...
Hoping always, You"ll be proud...
It's alright if you'll not be loud...

All i want is for us to bond..

Yes, I am not a kid nor a child..
ever anymore...
But still, there is that longing...
I can not deny...

I miss you much, daddy...

BY 
olive_eloi
contest: POEM FOR DADDY
SPONSOR: LEONORA GALINTA
2ND PLACE - TO GOD BE THE GREATEST GLORY...
NOTE: I REALLY MISS A FATHER'S LOVE..

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  1. Date: 3/14/2014 1:43:00 AM

    Olive, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 10:47:00 PM

    Olive, tremendous tribute to your father. Congrats on your win!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 3/14/2014 12:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you.. :) to GOD be the glory as always.. :D
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 5:41:00 PM

    We never get too big for Daddy's hug. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 3/14/2014 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANKS JOYCE.. :) to GOd our greatest father be always the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 5:11:00 AM

    Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, olive

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 3/13/2014 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you sir.. to God be the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 3:16:00 AM

    Congratulations my dear friend olive . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 3/13/2014 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much.. :) to God always be the glory :)