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Red Sun

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Below is the poem entitled Red Sun which was written by poet Sasha Maharaj. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Red Sun

Blazing red sun over the horizon, 

Rising silently in the Far East.

Splashing beautiful colours across the sky,

Awakening Passion inside me.









CONTEST: RED SUN

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  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:04:00 PM

    Nice imagery, my friend.... Jake

    Maharaj Avatar Sasha Maharaj Date: 7/1/2013 2:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many Thanks John :)
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:31:00 AM

    Beautiful picture you have penned here.Just check the syllable scheme of a Dodoitsu.I am afraid your poem has problem with syllable count.

    Maharaj Avatar Sasha Maharaj Date: 6/24/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many Thanks Mr Kash.... yes i have done that and also viewed examples and noticed that the syllable count was almost similar to mine. i could be wrong though. but thank you so much for the encouragement
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 3:01:00 AM

    You've penned it well Sasha. Well done and good luck. AO

    Maharaj Avatar Sasha Maharaj Date: 6/24/2013 3:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You so much :)
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 12:50:00 AM

    I love your colourful interpretation of the red sun and its effect on you, Sasha. Best of luck in the competition... David

    Maharaj Avatar Sasha Maharaj Date: 6/24/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many Thanks.. Was just a try.... First time writing this style :)