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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 11:11:00 AM

    Jancarl,... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 11:16:00 AM

    .Jancarl, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT ~

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 9:06:00 AM

    Ghostly and very believable. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 7:56:00 AM

    I love the subtlety of this piece.

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Hi jancarl,,, this is so sweet, really enjoyed reading soft whiteness, Its funny how we have these physical attachments sometimes to non living things. You really captured that feeling that so many can relate to thanks for sharing & also visiting my poem,,,really appreciate your comment:) cheriex

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 12:34:00 PM

    Jancari....i can feel the moment....nice! Had a similar experience when leaving a favorite apt. Yrs. Ago.....your garden sounds wonderful! Enjoy! Jimbo

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 11:56:00 AM

    Very deep provoking poem. Loved this. Have a great weekend. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 1:43:00 AM

    The way you penned this was very unsettling... almost as if the house were alive. Though I wonder why that should be creepy? Great free-verse, my friend.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 1:43:00 AM

    The way you penned this was very unsettling... almost as if the house were alive. Though I wonder why that should be creepy? Great free-verse, my friend.