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A FRIEND I FOUND

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Below is the poem entitled A FRIEND I FOUND which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A FRIEND I FOUND

there, i saw a clue..
telling me about you..
simple but uniquely.true..
a friend, i found with you...

you keenly hear me out..
removing all my pouts..
though, i am a bit stout..
we glide in our whereabouts..

we shared quirky jokes..
but never ever we poke..
together, we surely evoke..
genuine joy no one can soak..

holding each other hands..
reassuring gestures we lend..
whereever we do land..
obvious, thy mounting bond..

you are my friend..
my friend..
i keep you til the end..
hoping we'll never bend.

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  1. Date: 5/15/2014 8:55:00 AM
    that is put together so well, you are young too, don't stop, I did, when I was a teen I wrote, but life got busy and it took last shelf, it took years to blow the dust out of my brain and after about 3 years, I still feel I am at the beginning and need to keep improving, a just started feeling I should have left behind long ago,

  1. Date: 5/14/2014 6:56:00 PM
    Hi Olive, An entertaining write. A friend you found and now you keep said friend. This piece flows so nicely from begining to end. It Is always amazing the little gems one can find when one looks back. Take this write for instance. I always believed In keeping my friends close. Enjoyed the write Olive. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 5/13/2014 8:53:00 PM
    hi Olive,... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 5/13/2014 6:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Olive

  1. Date: 5/11/2014 7:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on getting featured, Olive! I can't believe there aren't more comments on this sweet beauty.

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/12/2014 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Jake.. :)
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:44:00 AM
    Very heart warming. Thank you for sharing Olive

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/12/2014 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.. :) wow.. how could i miss thanking you.. :O