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Flatliner

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Below is the poem entitled Flatliner which was written by poet Eileen Ghali. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Flatliner

F-  Feelings deep no longer there
L-  Love once aflame, now just rare
A- Adoration once consumed
T- Taste of passion now is doomed	
L-  Laughter, a sweet memory
I-  “Irresistible”….history
N-  Newness gone stale ….to no avail…
E-  Excitement not found in bed
R-  Reality dawns: LOVE IS d….e…..a…..d…………………………….

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 6/20/2013 9:47:00 AM

    Wow Eileen, when you tell us love is dead, surly there is no hope, yet your poetry stands out, one assured with your mighty pen, love will return, because love is you and you are it....

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/21/2013 1:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Harry, that is such a sweet comment! I will treasure it dearly. Thanks ever so much! Love your visits.
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 8:40:00 AM

    This is brilliant, hopefully you were revived by the relationship defibrillator. Ba bump ba bump ba bump

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/21/2013 1:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) I don't know how this came to me...but, yes....it does kick in and revive me very well! :) Thanks for the post, Richard. Always a pleasure
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 4:47:00 PM

    Brilliant, that's the way it is. This is very inventive my little Desert Orchid, and the flatline trail off is just fantastic. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/20/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Richard....Desert Orchid thanks you for this post!, and for being such a gentleman in unobtrusively pointing out my mistake in the use of Flatliner. Aren't you a dear! Glad you liked it. That last bit came to me just as I was posting it!