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Humans need an after life

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Humans need an after life

(unfit 
category 
but no 
choice.)

Life would 
be 
worthless 
and 
short
If this is 
the only 
dear life 
we 
have
Great 
plans just 
death can 
abort
to be 
useless 
once you 
met 
your grave.

And for 
those who 
die young, 
in 
chilhood's 
tender 
ages
How short 
and 
incomplete 
life 
would be
How 
unfair and 
unlucky if 
death's 
the end 
for them
Besides 
life to the 
fullest is 
eternity.

What 
about 
those who 
born 
and die 
poor
or those 
born deaf, 
blind or 
lame
What if 
they were 
so 
doomed 
without 
any cure
How 
unlucky if 
resurrection 
never 
came!

But a 
belief that 
there's a 
life 
after this
could be 
of great 
consolation 
and solace
especially 
to the 
poor 
handicapped, 
the 
shortlived
that they 
could 
make it up 
under 
heaven's 
grace!

For the 
good one 
who is 
born 
blind
In heaven 
shall he in 
brighter 
vision see
And the 
goodly 
one yet 
who 
has lost 
his mind
will in the 
afterlife 
be as sane 
as could be

The deaf 
man with 
his balance 
of pious 
acts
Only the 
hereafter 
would 
compensate 
what he 
lacks

And that 
godly one 
born poor 
and who 
dies poor
could be 
of the 
richest at 
heaven's 
door

In this life 
those 
who've 
been 
saintly yet 
unable to 
talk
could 
cheer up 
to believe 
what 
heaven 
has in 
stock
For this 
world can 
be misery, 
heaven's 
the place 
to rock
In this 
world at 
times 
you've 
to let the 
hawks 
gawk
Knowing 
your 
tormentor 
in 
heaven 
shall ye 
mock

Thus for a 
true 
happy 
ever 
after
for an 
abode of 
mirth and 
laughter
Work 
towards 
thy 
hereafter
A divine 
place 
devoid of 
disaster!

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  1. Date: 6/10/2014 4:20:00 PM
    I absolutely adore this poem... Think it made me a fan... Will have to read more of your writings soon!... Arlene...

  1. Date: 12/26/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this lovely poem. warm thoughts , ralph

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 8:08:00 PM
    oh my! wow.. love the win...........SKAT

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 9:03:00 PM
    Enjoyed your winning poem xxxx

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 6:32:00 PM
    congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:42:00 PM
    S. Z K. , Congratulations... Enjoyed your inspired write from the Phil Collins theme “Another day in Paradise." take care.... LINDA

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Amazing ! Congratulations well deserved , not only a 1st place , a scholar or Visionary. When I was at my very dark moment , questioning why ? I opened the bible and there it was John 15 , verse 18 , you speak of "the World s Hatred " 'If the World Hates you , It hated me 1st " Jesus Christ ."

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:56:00 AM
    S, Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:03:00 AM
    congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on the first place win, Zaynub

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 2:54:00 AM
    Congratulations. Thank you for the support extended.Always yours (: ) Jenish Soosai Anthony.

    Kamoonpuri Avatar S.zaynub Kamoonpuri
    Date: 11/27/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx sooo much poet Undertaker!
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:35:00 AM
    A very interesting thought. I like this poem

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:27:00 PM
    love the way you constructed this. I've always had the thought of those handicapped souls are really angels who have come down to teach us compassion ;}

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:47:00 PM
    ZAINAB ,WELL WRIITEN AITH PROFOUND OPTIMISTIC IDEAS, but try to add rhythem while addition of consonents ,have you ever heard the saying of Legend The Robert Frost, about free verse poetry is like playing tennis without net.I am not gonna critic you, but giving you positve aspect of thoughts.keep up.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 4:10:00 AM
    Yes knowing that we have a second chance, is a lovely thought to ponder on...I really enjoyed reading this poem thank you,,,, s zaynub

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 9:43:00 AM
    I found this a very thoughtful poem, full of hope. Some nice rhyming to. Well done

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Very inspiring write, you are so right! really enjoyed it Hakim

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:27:00 PM
    yes we do need an after life.. somewhere reassuring... enjoyed... LINDA

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