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The Blue

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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The Blue

Dubieties engulf all around
 As the brume in the dawn
  Behold plants seeking strength
In this warm cuddling cloud  
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Songs soon sing from the sky
 The common notes that play
  When it’s about to drop wet
 Upon human’s bower.

It’s wonted (by this time) to descry 
 Dark clouds being deserted
By its everyday residents.

In the mood of the inclement
 It’s sparse to hear
  Any row from the firmament
Other than the loyal sound 
  Of the saturated pattering
From the blue yonder.



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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:27:00 PM

    a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 12:20:00 AM

    Congratulations, AO. Love what you have done with this poem... David

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:49:00 PM

    Abdulhafeez, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:04:00 PM

    Great job! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:15:00 PM

    I like the way your described the songs from the sky which could only be rolling thunder and maybe the soon pattering of the rain on the ground. I like your use of inclement as unmercifcul, perhaps. Congratulations on your win, Abdul, clearly a winner in my estimation.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:34:00 PM

    The verbiage & flow of this piece was quite touching. I really enjoyed what you did here. Thanks so much for presenting this awesome poem in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:20:00 PM

    congrats on your win AO..

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:38:00 AM

    a very interesting poem. I love that blue yonder!

    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 6/20/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my Lady.
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:23:00 PM

    - Competent and beautiful, A.O. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 6/19/2013 12:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks AL
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:02:00 AM

    Abdulhafeez, it is sang beautifully :-) a warm feeling, thank you & take care <3 <3 luv* ~ SKAT ~

    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 6/19/2013 12:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah, a warm feeling.Take care Skat and thanks.