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Take Please My Hands

Come my darling and take please my hands When the tender birds are fast asleep When the stars would weep upon the sands And the sultry trees, our secrets keep For by the verdant paths and mountain's steep There our love would spring like flowers In all the night's enchanted hours Would you take my hands to softly tread The fields that hangs the amour moon When all the world and night is dead In this gladsome spring of June But before the morn returns to soon I bow my knees in love's fair plea To say my love,would you marry me?
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Its a Rime Royal Sonnet.

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:32:00 AM
    How could she resist! This is so romantic.

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 8:50:00 AM
    Really well written. That's why I believe she said yes.... Love you, my brother... Jake

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/23/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jake for that encouraging comment partner.
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:29:00 PM
    Sooo very romantoc and beautiful to read and reread.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/5/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Charmain for that beautiful comment my dear.
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:47:00 PM
    There is something so subtle, yet so amazing about simply holding one's hand. Your verse was beyond beautiful! You sure know how to wrap your reader in your heart. Love your romantic pieces. Keep it up! Always, Laura

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/5/2013 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear Laura,what a lovely thing to say.
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:39:00 AM
    - Beautiful thoughts and romance fills your poem! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/5/2013 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne,warm greetings to you.Hugs
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 10:28:00 AM
    Wow a lovely marvelous rhymin poem i read tday, truly l'amour! I tel u yor luv wud b delightd if u show it to her.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/5/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you S.zaynub for your wonderful comment buddy.
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:20:00 PM
    a paradise of wonderful longing; i am drowsy with the whiffs of your lines.. just lovely, lovely, mus...sigh!..:) huggs

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/5/2013 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear Nette for that truly wonderful comment.hugs
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Take my hand M...sweep me away, your poetry blows me away!!! Pure romance thankyou my friend:) cheriebunny..

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/22/2013 7:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Cheriebunny,nice to see you my friend.Thanks for your wonderful comment dear one.
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 9:09:00 AM
    So very romantic. Loved the ending. The words and flow were outstanding.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/22/2013 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol for your wonderful comment.So uplifting.
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 8:02:00 AM
    such delicate tenderness Dear Friend a sonnet that sings to me masterful write love Shadow x

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/19/2013 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear for your wonderful comment.Big hugs .
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Your writing is so professional...it flows perfectly...

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/19/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna for your encouraging words.Big hugs to you.
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 6:38:00 AM
    This is such a lovely marriage preposition You cover it well with all the flowers moon and sweet enchanted hours It is in such atmosphere That love empowers Beautiful write my friend keep up the good writes, have a blessed day xxxvxxx

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/19/2013 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your encouraging comment Rose.Wishing you a wonderful day to my dear.Hugs.. :)