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Delights

See what delights I bring you this day.
Don't worry , I won't stay.
Across this crowded forest room,  
I see there are many like you.
The winds waft to the clouds above.
The woods are bright on this day.
Nymphs have come out to play.
Bees are out sipping the morning dew.
And you, you have no sweets, do you ?
The mountain streams, they call to you. 
And in my breast , the serpent does lie.
By the stream stand crowded trees this day.
All things flourish as you turn away. 
Oh, how I long to pass my days with you.
As the wandering forest dances away. 




6/ 15/ 2013  Sat. 9 am

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 2:40:00 AM

    I love anything about nature, and I loved your poem, well done Peter

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:30:00 PM

    This is a beautiful, vivid one. I like how you implement nature and fantasy and mix it with passionate emotions. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 4:16:00 PM

    A beautiful scene and the picture stays in my mind long after.Hugs sweet lady, SuZ

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:32:00 AM

    can't beleave I used hear instead here. Sorry.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:28:00 AM

    many levels hear......I like it.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 1:24:00 AM

    all sounds ok mate ...keep em coming babe :)

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:28:00 AM

    Amazing...I really enjoyed your poems tonight. Thanks for sharing them! :) -Kate

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:07:00 AM

    You inspire me, your poems sure touch the heart, ma'am......:):):)

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:15:00 PM

    Debbie your poem as a wonderful vibrancy. I admire your creativity. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Ahhh!!Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for the visit to my work and taking time to comment..Your comments are always encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 11:16:00 AM

    mmmh...savoury sweet poem Debbie

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:58:00 PM

    How I long to pass my days with you............ This touches me in many ways Lovely piece of work. Keep Writing Shiraz

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 8:17:00 PM

    Love your whimsical quality, flow and imagery. Last line is my favorite :)

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:46:00 PM

    Your bring us fantasy and wander with this beautiful write Debbie, thank you for sharing this love & peace what a lovely blend of sentiments, xxxVxxx

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:36:00 PM

    Hi Debbie great creativity liked this lot, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:54:00 AM

    Really lovely Debbie, you brought the forest alive with this one. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 2:49:00 PM

    Is the last line "wondering" or "wandering"? Either way, this piece hit quite hard. Strong ending.

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 11:59:00 AM

    debbie, I too am awaiting that mini series, under the dome. There are SO many great shows on tv these days, I can hardly keep up with them. And READ a NOVEL? I don't even have time for it anymore. haha

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:21:00 PM

    what a cool poem. And the title fits it so well because it has such a delightful ring to it.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 1:55:00 PM

    Love your creativity Deb. This one is a gem. Wishing you a great weekend. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 1:30:00 PM

    I danced through this one, my dear...except for the serpent bit! yea...I'm a scardy cat! Lovely way how you brought nature alive, Debbie! Great write!

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:36:00 PM

    - An idyllic feeling in your beautiful forest. - Lovely, Debbie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)