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Delights

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Delights

See what delights I bring you this day.
Don't worry , I won't stay.
Across this crowded forest room,  
I see there are many like you.
The winds waft to the clouds above.
The woods are bright on this day.
Nymphs have come out to play.
Bees are out sipping the morning dew.
And you, you have no sweets, do you ?
The mountain streams, they call to you. 
And in my breast , the serpent does lie.
By the stream stand crowded trees this day.
All things flourish as you turn away. 
Oh, how I long to pass my days with you.
As the wandering forest dances away. 




6/ 15/ 2013  Sat. 9 am

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  1. Date: 7/28/2014 2:38:00 AM
    Hi Debbie! Excellent write and lovely imagery; a delight to read and picture in my mind. (delving into your past, while looking forward to new posts.) .......... paul

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 2:40:00 AM
    I love anything about nature, and I loved your poem, well done Peter

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:30:00 PM
    This is a beautiful, vivid one. I like how you implement nature and fantasy and mix it with passionate emotions. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 4:16:00 PM
    A beautiful scene and the picture stays in my mind long after.Hugs sweet lady, SuZ

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 7/3/2013 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Suzy ;}
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:32:00 AM
    can't beleave I used hear instead here. Sorry.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:28:00 AM
    many levels hear......I like it.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 1:24:00 AM
    all sounds ok mate ...keep em coming babe :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/26/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Don ;}
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:28:00 AM
    Amazing...I really enjoyed your poems tonight. Thanks for sharing them! :) -Kate

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:07:00 AM
    You inspire me, your poems sure touch the heart, ma'am......:):):)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/22/2013 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you ;}
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:15:00 PM
    Debbie your poem as a wonderful vibrancy. I admire your creativity. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/21/2013 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Connie ;}
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 6:10:00 PM
    Ahhh!!Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for the visit to my work and taking time to comment..Your comments are always encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 11:16:00 AM
    mmmh...savoury sweet poem Debbie

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/21/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:58:00 PM
    How I long to pass my days with you............ This touches me in many ways Lovely piece of work. Keep Writing Shiraz

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/18/2013 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you ;}
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 8:17:00 PM
    Love your whimsical quality, flow and imagery. Last line is my favorite :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/17/2013 8:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen ;}
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Your bring us fantasy and wander with this beautiful write Debbie, thank you for sharing this love & peace what a lovely blend of sentiments, xxxVxxx

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:36:00 PM
    Hi Debbie great creativity liked this lot, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:54:00 AM
    Really lovely Debbie, you brought the forest alive with this one. Take care, Richard

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/17/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard ;}
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Is the last line "wondering" or "wandering"? Either way, this piece hit quite hard. Strong ending.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/16/2013 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    glad you like it Drake, yes wandering is better then wondering, even though you say either way is good ;}
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 11:59:00 AM
    debbie, I too am awaiting that mini series, under the dome. There are SO many great shows on tv these days, I can hardly keep up with them. And READ a NOVEL? I don't even have time for it anymore. haha

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/16/2013 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know So many good shows for summer ;}
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:21:00 PM
    what a cool poem. And the title fits it so well because it has such a delightful ring to it.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/16/2013 2:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea ;}
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