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- Sticking Relationship -




                                       Hear it chugging and tasle
                                         The sun has gone down
                                         Twilight, is still not dark
                                   Small steps ... chugging and tasle
                                         The dog is standing still
                                           Sniffing and listening
                                           Sounds comes closer
                                   A small ball comes out of the bushes
                                      My favorite toy, the dog thinking
                                       Sticking her nose up ..... but ...
                                       The ball is full of sticking spines
                                            it makes a hissing sound
                                     Hedgehog will not play with the dog







15.06.2013
A-L  Andresen :)                 - This is my dog "Maya" :))


(5th in the contest)

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  1. Date: 2/28/2014 4:57:00 PM

    Hi Anne-Lise, I enjoyed this one. Dogs are always so inquisitive and most of the time it gets them into trouble. Our sheeba was just this way. She always wanted to play with everything, it did get her into some scrapes. It seems like your pooch got into a rather sticky situation. I could just imagine what it felt like. I once tried to pick one up without gloves on, never again. Imagine if your pooch had did a Sheeba and stuck her nose in. Enjoyed this one. Have a good day.Your Friend always.MIKE

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 5:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Always curious ........ but learn from it :))) - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Mike .- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 6:22:00 AM

    cool :) I also have dogs,,, I'm also planning to write a poem about my 5 dogs. Yeah right, pets are also worth for poems ^^

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/23/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Definitely they are our best friends :))) - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Flora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 4:43:00 AM

    This is a very amusing piece, Anne Lise. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Thank you for visiting my poetry. Love, Su

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2013 4:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Suzette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/10/2013 9:18:00 AM

    This is a very fun poem! I am happy that you left such a nice comment.I am glad that I was then directed to your site, looking forward to reading more of yours when I am out of work!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/10/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Alicia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 5:02:00 AM

    Very interesting, Anne, a nice one!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jag. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 5:13:00 PM

    This is pretty good. I have never seen a Hedgehog. It sounds pretty sticking. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/7/2013 5:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Lucilla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 6:52:00 PM

    Love this cute poem. We are into hot weather so I have been hibernating in the cool instead of baking in the sun. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/7/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Interesting piece of work. My son had a hedgehog... here we don't have them in the wild, and their called an exotic pet... After it's life time he got a sugar glider... it looks like a lemur... They are soooo cute... and clingy... Nam hung all over him where ever he went... They're community creatures... and don't do well alone.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Carol. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:50:00 AM

    He sounds nasty. Lovely poem. Betty

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Betty. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:22:00 AM

    Hedgehogs are better to be observed from a distance. Cute and lighthearted poem. :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Giorgio. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 9:27:00 AM

    I love so much your poem my dear friend, Anne Lise & so enjoyed the story. I've never seen a hedgehog yet but I hope he's a friendly creature with the dog :)). A great write indeed! My big heartfelt congratulations to you with big sweetest hugs! love lots, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Leonora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 12:56:00 PM

    Wonderful piece! Congrats thanks for submitting1 KIm

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2013 12:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 11:46:00 AM

    Great entry. I remember my dog tangling with a skunk and the results. We have a few porcupines but no hedgehogs. Are they the same? congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2013 12:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Joyce. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:05:00 AM

    Anne, I congratulate you on a delightful entry. God's little creatures can offer some memorable moments...... Love ya dearly... Jake

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, John. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 11:45:00 AM

    Very, very adorable! This was fun & brilliant!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2013 11:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Drake. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:07:00 AM

    Ha Ha, the end did make me chuckle, why do hedgehogs turn themselves into a ball if they don't want to play. LOL Loved the poem, thanks for the smile :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2013 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - They hide in their own bodies. - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Gary. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 2:41:00 AM

    Very endearing :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2013 2:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Benjamin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:10:00 PM

    This is cute. I really liked it. Thanks and God bless you.... Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2013 1:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Lucilla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 2:10:00 PM

    Love your poem Anne, wishing you a great week ahead and thank you for commenting on my poetry. Always love, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment,Gail .- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:23:00 PM

    had to come back to read this again.. am bringing my doggie to the vet this week; she is teething, oh my... best of monday to you, anne..hello to maya :) huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Nette .- oxox / / Anne-Lise & Maya :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:22:00 PM

    Nice little write here, Anne Lise.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Robert.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:58:00 AM

    This sounds cute to me beautiful use of words.....i have a cat and i knw hw cute they look doing these silly things.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 11:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Shiraz.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 7:49:00 AM

    Unique work using those animals around you to write a great work..I have never seen a hedgehog in real life only on TV for I don't think that we have them here..I guess the dog liked the ball even more because it would hiss...Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 8:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Sara.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 6:20:00 AM

    Very creative write Anne Lise, you must have an amazing dog, if we lived closer I'd bring my little Genie over for a visit, she is 13 years old, in human age I believe it makes her an old lady, but she is still very lovable, Have a great day my dear, and don't let anything or anyone get you down today, give them one of your heavenly smiles, and be on your way, Love xxx V

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, M.R. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 6:17:00 AM

    A lovely write dear Anne.Full of wit and beauty dear one.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Mustapha.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:23:00 AM

    so amusing ty for the smiles super poem much enjoyed Shadow

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 5:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Shadow.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 2:57:00 PM

    Caught my attention with this one Anne, nicely portrayed, feel sorry for what the dog, s about to recieve. Blessings Carl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/16/2013 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Carl.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 11:56:00 AM

    A beautiful game of animate and inanimate things lovely pictured. Here character of dog is clearly depicted. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/16/2013 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 11:44:00 AM

    Haha, that is too funny, Anne-Lise. Refreshing :).

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/16/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 7:27:00 AM

    This is Great! Nice twist.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/16/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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