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  1. Date: 12/27/2013 8:27:00 PM
    I know this playground.

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 4:42:00 AM
    Nice work Timothy, nice to read your work again.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 10:28:00 PM
    A very interesting, descriptive haiku I enjoyed the melancholy Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:18:00 PM
    nice haiku Tim ;}

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 11:55:00 PM
    Thanks for all the wonderful feedback, friends :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 6:37:00 AM
    I really liked the images you penned here. Thanks for posting your work and thanks for your comments on my "shhh" poem..

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:05:00 PM
    I really like the image of the "rusted swing". It gives the haiku some extra "punch". Peace & Blessings

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Where are yer

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 8:06:00 AM
    Time for a new swing I'd say. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Good morning Tim

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Poignant comes to my mind!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 6/16/2013 12:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I've always liked that word... poignant. It sounds nice rolling off the tongue :)
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 7:40:00 AM
    I'm with Kim on this one.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 6/16/2013 12:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rick!
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 7:12:00 AM
    When a Haiku makes you feel as if you are in the picture.. it is great.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 6/16/2013 12:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kim... that means a lot!
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 3:41:00 AM
    Memories with.their sweet sad thoughts.Lovely post Timothy

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 6/16/2013 12:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Can't remain in the past... but it's important to look back on it. Thanks for stopping by, Charmaine!
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:50:00 PM
    This is a wonderful and intriguing write my friend! I wonder what the effect would be if you changed the last line to, "old and rusting swing" just a creative idea, not wanting to change your poem any Timothy, just looking at what it would be like! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 6/16/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Russell... never apologize for saying what you really feel... I take criticism well especially when it's constructive. I see what you mean about "rusting" over "rusted"... it's a constant process of time passing on. Thanks for the suggestion!
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 1:34:00 PM
    - A really well written Haiku, Timothy !!!!! :) - Have a restful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 6/16/2013 12:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You as well Anne!