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NIMBUS SPRAWLS

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NIMBUS SPRAWLS



of late, the speed of amiable clouds lull then swallow that which bears the rustle of weeds on late night's walk among quartets of crooning songbirds... here i lie motionless like the tint of a wayfarer's breath.. above me, a carouse lof whistling stars flicker in season’s dewdrop of life, and i inhale the incredibly hypnotic call of migrant breeze that swings upon ribs of leaves where tenderness gushes with tenderness... how unstoppable are the fingers of nimbus spilling a basin of lotus and minted potpourri into my territory, requesting the jezebel in my body for a sway of wanton pleasure... and i stray among petals meshed with anklets of grass; exploring how i can taste more of this sprawling splendor so pagan and pure that a muted gasp can wipe the emptiness of any human moment. i feel the immaculate smoke above me enter my sacral vein… as i welcome the fire, together with ice. ---------- Above The Clouds Contest of Drake Ezses

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:28:00 PM

    a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 3:04:00 PM

    Nette congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:29:00 PM

    beautiful! congrats Nette xxx

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:25:00 AM

    This is so beautiful........I would have placed it at the top........truly this is poetry in ever sense of the reason we write poems. A beauty!!

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 12:30:00 AM

    Congratulations, Nette. Awesome writing - each line is so meaningful and exquisite... David

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:50:00 PM

    Nette, a nice win.... PD

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:08:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading again, congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:27:00 PM

    Nette, this was such a vibrant & colorful writing. I had a feeling this was you when I read this. :) Thanks so much for participating!!!

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 8:51:00 PM

    As i welcome the fire, together with ice...... just one word wow! I just love this piece

    Iqbal Avatar Shiraz Iqbal Date: 6/23/2013 8:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I should put down my pen too
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:55:00 AM

    A really fantastic write dear Nette,now I think I should put down my pen.

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 7:34:00 AM

    You master your words in a very special way. I enjoyed traveling upon your words.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:50:00 PM

    Excellent. well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:13:00 AM

    I like the synthesis, the idea and the philosophy behind it. I like the colors and expressive boldness. A usage of fewer adjectives would create a more unexpected atmosphere and enchanting element. Thank you for its beauty nette! :)

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 4:22:00 PM

    wow Nette this I can relate to its a fab pen my kinda poem Shadow x

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 4:03:00 PM

    Interesting lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..This one is unique one of a kind for sure..Thanks for the visit to my note..Bad for Cody to have to bury his dad on Father's Day..Sara

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:25:00 PM

    This is truly fascinating my friend, you have brought me to my knees in awe of the beauty of this tremendous write! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a tremendous rendition greatness, an awesome display of magnificence Nette, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Wow nette,this is amazing!!!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 12:04:00 PM

    You are not only the incarnation of poetry but of philosophy as well!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 11:50:00 AM

    Wow Nette, I'd like some of the incarnated talent of yours, beautiful as ever xxx

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 11:39:00 AM

    - Nette ..... awesome written ..... accomplished poet you are!! - Have a restful weekend - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)