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Do You Remember

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Below is the poem entitled Do You Remember which was written by poet Daniel Eyler. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Do You Remember

Crawling across the floors
Trapped behind closed doors
Never wanting anymore
but to stay age 4

Do you remember childhood
Rolling through the grass
Excited for your class
Waiting for the time to pass

Do you remember the days
Pedaling on your bike
The girl that you still like
You get Sad when the bell strikes

Do you remember the time
Driving down the road
Those looks you made with code
Your love that always showed

Do you remember the pain
When it broke your heart
And it was just the start
This is the beginning of art

Do you remember childhood
When childhood was still there
And your heart wasn't bare
And people would actually care

Do you remember the fun
That we always had
is made us very glad
but now it makes me mad

There is no turning back
when you hit that certain age
you fell emotion in your body and you let it out with rage

my childhood was innocent
when the world seemed to be fair
when my universe was around my toys
and i didnt even care

my childhood was the time when 9 lives lived in my dreams
i began to grow up
i had to use support beams

my childhood was the time when my life was filled with bother
when sorrows knocked at my door
I gave everything to the almighty father

my childhood was the time when love was pure
when there were no obligations
there may never be a cure

my childhood was the time which is long ago
tears flow from my eyes when i go back in my home

my childhood will never come back but
the child in me will never go
Live you life to the fullest
and make it as pure as gold

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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Hi Daniel. - A very well written poem - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 11:08:00 PM
    a very good poem Daniel. Stopping by with a sweet smile and a warm Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless.......... Hugs* "SKAT"

    Eyler Avatar Daniel Eyler
    Date: 6/16/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you so much I just finished a new poem if you want to check it out I would be pleased.
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:54:00 PM
    You have some very good thoughts Daniel. I suggest some proof reading and a little attention to the structure of the poem. In this one it looks like your passion of the subject took you a little off track toward the end. . My advice is to perfect it on paper before you put it on line. If it doesn't sound right to you then it won't sound right to us. Also spell check because I feel like I stumble when I read a word that isn't spelled right. However, I enjoyed this read a great deal. Rockman

    Eyler Avatar Daniel Eyler
    Date: 6/16/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you so much I just finished a new poem if you want to check it out I would be pleased.
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 9:53:00 PM
    Daniel. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda

    Eyler Avatar Daniel Eyler
    Date: 6/16/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you so much I just finished a new poem if you want to check it out I would be pleased.