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Time

Minutes pass like the slow falling grains in an hourglass. 
Days fade away like the clouds of spring showers in early May.
Time goes on though you may not hear the ticks.
With mysterious design
Time; one of nature’s best tricks. 
Some of us move forward,
Others stuck in the past.
Though we must be quick to make a move,
For this moment could be our last.
Seconds waste no time like the beating of my heart.
Hours can seem torturous.
Those who are impatient would rather be torn apart.
Your life may end when expected or suddenly,
But remember time doesn’t stop for you,
Neither will it for me.

03.28.2013

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  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:03:00 AM
    Very nice Andrea, I really enjoyed your poem. It's verses ring so true. Loved it.

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 7/11/2013 1:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for the compliment! :)
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Hey Andrea, This is so true, time cannot rewind or pause, If you let it pass it's your loss. Great poem! Hakim

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 7/11/2013 1:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thats right! Make it count, thanks for the comment!
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 12:35:00 PM
    Your poem is featured:) congratulations, hope you have a good week, SKAT

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 7/11/2013 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!! :)
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 8:48:00 AM
    That is some intense time poetry that goes with the relativity of time and the sensory overload your brain can feel when time drags on. I raise a hand with only thumbs to this. :)

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 7/11/2013 1:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for your kind words!
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Strong metaphysics in this write Andrea - good customization on a classic theme, no simple task, no slight accomplishment - the heart is a very efficient instrument - the 10th line has magic in it - J.A.B. %

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/15/2013 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for all of the appreciation. Yes a classic theme I tried to put a simple but truthful twist on and didn't mention a thing about it healing as many people do. Not saying it is a good or bad thing just glad I felt I had more to say other than that I guess. But thanks again Justin!
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:59:00 PM
    Your poem is cool, Andrea.............SKAT

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/15/2013 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the love! :)
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 9:29:00 PM
    Hi Andrea,. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/15/2013 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I looked at your contest and entered thank you for telling me about it :) enjoy reading your submissions and thank you for the welcome as well and I hope you get to enjoy my poetry as I am sure I will thoroughly enjoy yours.
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:08:00 PM
    THIS IS COOL YES TIME WAITS FOR NO MAN THIS IS JUST LIKE MY RECENT POEM CALLED TIME NOT IN SAME PATTERN BUT SAME THEAME LOVE IT WELCOME TO SOUP XXX DAVIDSCOTT LOVE YOPUR AVATAR

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/14/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol my avatar is me! And thank you for all your compliments.
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 2:14:00 PM
    This was very well written. Thank you for sharing and for you visiting my poems. I'm glad you can relate. I've come across a couple of people here on the soup that think like me and I like them... well done!!!

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/14/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Your welcome and thank you again for your kid words!
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 9:17:00 AM
    Beautiful piece, time sure is harsh and for many of us who stand idly by fate is never late. - Edward

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/14/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thats why we need to live life to the fullest :) as I have stated in my other poem!
    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/14/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    &Thank You again!
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 12:52:00 AM
    - Andrea, lovely poem. - Thank you - Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Have fun with poetry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/14/2013 4:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aw thank you so much Anne-Lise :) The love is much much appreciated! I am already enjoying this site just getting some recognition for my work also the simple fact I can share my thoughts of course as well as inspire others and being inspired! Hope you have a lovely day! xo
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 10:50:00 PM
    You couldn't be more right. Act fast, but smart and embrace the "YOLO". :)

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/13/2013 11:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again Drake!
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Awesome write...your work is truly amazing and inspiring....thanks for sharing.

    Rose Avatar Andrea Rose
    Date: 6/13/2013 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, it just comes to me. I hear the first 2 lines in my head and then next thing I know I have my yellow notebook out and my pencil is just flowing uncontrollably. I love it.