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Chain Reactions

Chain Reactions, I fall like the first dominoe
The point of entry and the ballistics
I leave tracks and I read the tracks of men
He's the Commander ask him about the optimum use of Infantry
Strategy, strategically at all cost hold the battle line
Wearing my camoflauge, thats me dressed in descrection
Soft in my letters, open minded and receptive
to every word she has ever spoken
Words fixed and framed set like A jewel
set on the head of A Queen
On the throne she sits
And the hope she gave me
And every thrust made by her enemies I have parried
As I endure another risk Death is probable
In these kind of perils many men will perish
My hearts noble 
much of what I feel is left unsaid
I've been sitting here all day like a statue

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  1. Date: 6/14/2013 8:32:00 AM
    this seems so complex, Timothy, yet your poetic skills are not...and yes so enjoyable to read...

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 8:09:00 PM
    Hi Timothy, it's time to make your move my friend... how else will you get the jewel.. Always ~ LINDA