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Mr Doggy

Hey Mr Doggy, you are as tall as me
I am doing you a favour, stand still and you will see
I am going to wash and dry you, and make you smell so nice
Because at the minute, you smell like my dead mice.

Mummy told me off when; I washed my mice in the bath
I thought they would like a swim, but that idea was naff.
She told me not to bathe things that are smaller than me
So I am going to wash you, you will like it, just wait and see.

You have curly hair; I want to brush it out
Mummy uses conditioner on me, so it doesn’t make me shout
I haven’t got conditioner so I am using some stuff I found
It doesn’t look too bad, and it only cost a pound.

Please let me scrub you now, as I am not in a rush
I already washed daddy’s car, I found a wire brush
It’s made some pretty silver lines and he will just love them
Some look like flowers, on a very long stem.

I have my bucket of water; I found the water in the loo
So don’t worry please Mr Doggy, I know it looks all blue
You will be the cleanest dog, anyone ever saw 
And mummy won’t be mad, when she sees my messy floor
  
I didn’t mean to do it but when the fish wanted to play
I thought they might like a walk as it is a sunny day
It took me ages to catch them, the silly little fish
And they weren’t very happy when I left them in that dish

They didn’t seem to like it when I took them from the tank 
And when they went to sleep, they began to smell quite rank 
I tried to put them back but when I dropped them in
I fell and pulled the tank off and it didn’t half make a din

So now I am cleaning up, everything I see
And I know mummy and daddy will be pleased with me
So Mr Doggy, please stand still and let me get you clean 
I even have some paste that says your teeth will gleam.

© 12/06/2013 
Contest Entry: Little Lad and Big Dog


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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 9:21:00 AM
    Mandy Such a clever and creative write. You captivate the reader from beginning to end with this silly and humorous tale of your cleaning antics. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Vampire poem.

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 9:44:00 PM
    MANDY, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ a fine winning poem in the "Little Lad and big Dog" contest by: Seren.... entertaining work... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 4:48:00 PM
    Mandy, I love the humor! I can just picture the scene. Congrats on your win! Hope you are feeling better. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 5:12:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win Mandy

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 2:31:00 AM
    you really zoomed in poetically on your story such a g r e a t write Congrats!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Very entertaining, love the wit... uhmmm... I hope doggy fairs better than the car, the fish and the mice ... ha ha congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 8:14:00 PM
    Cute as can be.! congrats. BG

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:50:00 PM
    Congrats and thank you for your entry.....Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/7/2013 7:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol i should have guessed it was yours
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 8:45:00 AM
    clever poetry, Mandy, i see a lot of you in here also,, i think this will do really well in the contest, i do hope so....

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 6/14/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ha ha so you think i walked my fish and bathed my mice lol,, thanks harry, luv ya xx
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 1:17:00 PM
    Mandy, This is a keeper.... Well done and displays the truth...."When you give a doggy a bath, you better be ready to take one yourself.... Love ya.... Jake

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 6/14/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you jake xx
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 5:43:00 AM
    Lucky dog! Wonderfully amusing, marvelously written! Good luck! It seems a winner!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 6/14/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Demitrios xx
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 5:12:00 PM
    Mandy this is outstanding. An excellent entry for this contest. Never so well expressed. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 6/14/2013 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Gosh thanks Connie xx
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 5:55:00 AM
    I have to fav this Mandy, your mind is so fertile I can grow Roses in it if you let me. I have a tub that reads, it will let your heart gleam, what you say girlfriend, can I come live inside your head for one day? Cause probably that's as long as I'd want to stay, love you, Always, Your Rose xxx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 6/14/2013 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ha fertile mind so you know what cr-p i in there lol bless you flower xx