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A Story about a Girl

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A Story about a Girl

I have to tell a story
About a girl who had no glory

Out Spoken,
Yet so broken

Being rude,
Always in a mood

Never had luck with guys
They will take one look at her and realize,
That they want her friend in the dazzling disguise

She felt very unattractive
Yet wanted to be active

Always taking a back seat
Never felt strong enough to take the lead

On a low,
Wanting no-one to know
The true beauty inside, who wants to burst out and show

She started to analyse and delve
Within herself

Believed that there was something within her,
She just needed to stir

She became beautiful and bold
She discovered gold

Humble and kind
With an open and wise mind

She realized the fight was never external
It was always internal

She is now happy and content with her beautiful soul
She has reached her goal 
Her inner beauty is what makes her glow
Yes from insecure to bold she did grow
The way she sway her hips when she walks
The kind words she says when she talks
Her heart filled with love, compassion and integrity
This is her serendipity 

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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Congratulations Shannon..' '

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 3:09:00 AM
    Congratulations Shanon xx

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 3:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your sweet win my dear Shanon! Thanks for sharing your poem. love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Shanon , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for entering this wonderful loving poem. Thank you for the warm feeling and smiles!!! I posted a sweet blog, to all who took the time in supporting my contest "ALL ABOUT ME..." **YES I SMILE** :-) ~xox~ LINDA

    Jacobs Avatar Shanon Jacobs
    Date: 6/17/2013 3:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow thank you, LINDA......Im so, so stunned. Really didnt expect this:). Poetry, booster i must say....
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 4:01:00 AM
    this just made me remember a 1direction song. and im not even a fan.

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 3:28:00 AM
    - Shanon, a enjoyable poem to read - well done!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)