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She Waits

She Waits with wanton desires 
It's been six months out to sea

She read from his words 
He did not disappoint  her 

Words of love & lust dripped 
From Lavender scented pages

She longed to read those words 
Seemed forever and a day 

You know where to stand 
Where I can see all of your glory

Do not wash, I dream of your smell 
So there she stood  "waiting "
 For the captain  of her heart!  

8pm 10/ 13/ 2011

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  1. Date: 5/1/2014 2:06:00 PM
    Lovely and romantic read Debbie. Looking forward with desire for him to return. What a build-up! // paul

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 10:49:00 AM
    i wrote a poem about waiting forever and day, i think I have been waiting for those I love for a long time, completely understand

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 3:41:00 AM
    Toe-n-Toe and the flow tween toe n toe, it rose to a fever pitch, tween her thighs she gripped him, just so! the heat of the flesh ceased to itch, just a bit..... but he was rising and rising some more, though.... till into the blackness, exhaustion he slipped......Don re:Debbie Duncan "She Waits"

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 7/8/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Does that mean you liked it Don ;}
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 12:19:00 PM
    wow!! so romantic!! a very nice poem of yours friend Debbie ;) I like it..Have a nice day :) Maria

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/24/2013 5:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Maria ;}
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:33:00 PM
    Dreamy write full of love and desire. I like very much. Hugs

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/24/2013 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecilia ;}
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 8:48:00 PM
    Whoops! I'm sorry Debbie... what a goofball I am!

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 8:46:00 PM
    Very romantic! How hard it must be for wives/lovers when their men are away at sea with no idea when they will return. Well done Donna! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 6:09:00 AM
    wow!beautiful poem

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/22/2013 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:05:00 PM
    That waits thing yeah that exists even not being a sea captain..... It just captures your thoughts..Am having wonderful morning reading your works Shiraz

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/18/2013 12:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you ;}
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Hi, Debbie … I love well-writ arousing poetry, and you've definitely stirred me in all the right places with this one. As a sailor, there is o much dancing forth from your words I relate to, especially: "You know where to stand Where I can see all of your glory Do not wash, I dream of your smell" Stimulating imagery, Milady. Warmest hug of thanks to you, Debbie ~ Richard

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/17/2013 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard ;}
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:00:00 AM
    very nice read... love-how can we live without it

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 8:24:00 AM
    It is a poem of involving love done of sensual feelings too

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/17/2013 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mario ;}
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 1:48:00 AM
    Hi Debbiie great couplet nice to be back and reading such wonderful stuff on the soup again, loved it, all the best Poetowen

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/15/2013 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Owen ;}
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 1:06:00 AM
    Ps., I Was Thinking About My Ex-Girlfriend When I Poe'd The Grim Reaper, Beautiful Debbie. Thank You For Your Beauty's Kind Visit. Love, John

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/15/2013 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Johnny ;}
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Debbie, you are being very romantic, and also you tap into the senses. Now, I never know whether you are writing from some kind of personal experience or from empathy with something you've seen or perhaps something completely different. I always want to know what inspires a poet's words. However, now you always have me guessing. In any case, it is a pleasure to see what you've created. Thank-you for all your comments and kindness. CIAO!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/13/2013 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Duke ;}
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Nice romantic tale to this wonderful poem. love phyl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Phyllis ;}
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Sorry I haven't been around as much lately, dear Debbie! Moving on Tuesday and should be back on track after that! Hugs, Jack xoxox

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    See you when you get back ;}
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 10:06:00 AM
    This was very cool! A need for the one to return. Nicely done! :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/13/2013 11:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Drake ;}
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Ok write not my taste but well written.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/14/2013 12:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading Cherl ;}
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 12:53:00 PM
    Reminds me of a eighties hit song by a Swiss group known as "Double". Good write.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/12/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert ;}
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