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Below is the poem entitled Time which was written by poet Rick Zablocki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Time

Seconds into minutes
Hours into days into weeks
Running on empty

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  1. Date: 7/3/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Rick I love this well portrayed and ty for visiting my work Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 12:03:00 AM
    There's the truth for yah . Excellent words. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:09:00 AM
    a fine rush of images... great work!...: huggs

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Nothing more to say. Concise and true. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:02:00 AM
    Makes me think of work

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 2:57:00 AM
    A poem that begs so many questions...well done!

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 1:52:00 PM
    I really like this. Great minds think alike. I started out one of my oldies poems saying the same thing: seconds into minutes, etc!!!

    Simmonds Avatar Keith Simmonds
    Date: 6/16/2013 3:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Great! Depicts the awareness of the implacable passge of time!
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 3:26:00 PM
    no way am i running on empty. time is running out,,,,,,,, love is the senryu, SKAT

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 5:48:00 PM
    WOW. Such a small piece with a powerful punch... the last line nails it :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 5:17:00 PM
    Oh boy, this is so profound,..small piece..lots said. BG

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:30:00 PM
    Creative work..For some time is running on empty for sure...Thanks for stopping by..Sara