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What Annoys Me

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What Annoys Me

What annoys me to the core
Is a man to his word untrue
For honor is tied to manhood
It does annoy me, how ‘bout you?

They emasculate themselves
With the lies that they dare tell
And it makes me want to wish
That they’d sizzle away in hell

Annoyed? WOW! Annoyed for sure
And wanting to give them thumps
When they say, “I understand”
Then go and act like chumps

A MAN is one who says one thing
And doesn’t do another
Who lives by the words he says
As a lover, friend, or brother

The glory days of chivalry
When for your honor you’d die
Have gone away and now remains
The honorless fool with a lie

I’m annoyed and I’m incensed
By MEN who claim to be
Honest and trustworthy...
Stay the hell away from me!

June 10, 2013
For Contest Entry- What Annoys You
By Frank H

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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 2:35:00 PM
    Did you eversearched on youtube -The annoying orange-I guess its somehow like the way these kind of man make you feel ...grr: ) Enjoyed reading your poem dear.Btw i didn t receive any souo m from you : ) Waiting

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    AH! Yes...I know that orange! ;) Yea...true, my dear! I sent you another soup mail! Hope you get this one! Hugs!
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Hell Ya! You said exactly what I'm feeling Eileen...I'm so done with lying scumbags and pray I never fall prey to another one again. Awesome write! Hugs

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh...I hope you don't either, Cecilia! A man is only as good as his word! Don't settle for less! Hugs!
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Wow, you do sound annoyed. I try not to be that guy but if I am honest there are times I have played the chump.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Honesty is the best policy! This was just a rant, Richard...I was just enjoying getting my evil twin out for a day in the sun! ;) Chumps will be given sugar lumps if they repent! ;)
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 5:21:00 PM
    You certainly got it off your chest in this write lol, no one is immune to type of person. BTW, I write English-English, 'Quite', means, totally, utterly, completely, truly, not sure what you think it means, hmmmmm back at you lol. Take care, Richard

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/13/2013 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Naughty as ever.....:-)
    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 6/11/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're welcome, quite welcome lol
    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/11/2013 4:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the lesson in English-English, Richard! In that case, you are forgiven, though I don't buy it completely! Thanks for the post!
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 5:17:00 PM
    well said - i can feel your annoyance! best of luck in the contest...

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/11/2013 4:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Over the top for dramatic effect! ;) That's me, my dear! I don't have much hope for the contest, but...thanks for wishing me luck!
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:29:00 PM
    Oh boy, I have certainly felt this way before... Your anger is a tangible thing in this poem! Great job, lady! (Unfortunately, I do know some women like this too...)

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/11/2013 4:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, there are some women like this too! That's certain! Thanks for stopping by, Heather! Would love to visit your work, but I've got to defend my proposal this afternoon and I'm just having a mini break! Hugs!
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:09:00 PM
    So, I think you were too subtle in this piece. ;) Wonderful venting lines here!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/10/2013 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thanks! Well...the rules did say be humorous! This is my attempt at humor! ;) Good one, eh???? I was going to be a bit more sarcastic, but held back...Still have to play the part of the "lady" Thanks for the visit!!!!
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Oh, and to your question...yes, twice in a period of 7 years doing what I do I've had a piece of slag burn through my pants while sitting down and welding(small one--size of a pinky nail) and bounce around down there...ha...no real damage done though. I do a lot of welding here in hard to reach areas. I have quite a few scars on my hands and arms from it...none in the nether-regions though..hahahaha. I just have one of those jobs where small injuries(and sometimes big ones) are part of it.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/10/2013 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so so sorry to know that! OUCCHHHHHH! Glad you are damage free, my dear. Strong man! Do take care, though, ya hear?
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Yikes!...haha. Seriously though, you're right. So many men these days are sorry excuses for what they should be. Lack of integrity, lack of honor, an abundance of lies.....so sad....but not all of them...;)

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 6/10/2013 2:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No, Caleb....not all men are like that! What can I say? Anyway...maybe that's enough for now! Thanks for the post...glad the shoulder is still available...last few days have been HELL! More to come....I will survive!