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Please Spare Me This Dance

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Below is the poem entitled Please Spare Me This Dance which was written by poet Mustapha Mohammed. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Please Spare Me This Dance

Theres a fire burning upon midnights creek 
The symphonic melodies of natures beat 
Under a thousand stars the nights entranced
My love,my love please spare me this dance.

On this road where two hearts are unfold
Together as one as the night grows old.
One life to live but this love to die for
Please spare me this dance I do implore.

Shed not those mournful tears lonely down
On the white musk rose on dewy ground.
Feedest your soul within this gothic romance
My love,my love please spare me this dance.

When I look into your eyes the stars unfold
The heavens in bright on bedarkened world
Oh if I should die within this trance
My love,my love please spare me this dance.

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  1. Date: 12/28/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Hi Mustapha, need I say another fine write by you, I don't think so, we both know that. The words say it all and any normal lady would be saying yes, they would spare you the dance. The sadness is there my friend but there is hope, the hope for that dance. Stand tall my friend and let the world see your light. At the moment you may not want to write much but don't let that rose wilt. The glory of your words have to be out there. Catch you later. Your |Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 5:14:00 PM
    A very romantic and heartfelt poem, with just a hint of sadness. Your words flowed just effortlessly here. I really enjoy reading your fantastic poetry! Nicely done, Mustapha!

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:13:00 AM
    Love it ;}

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 4:50:00 AM
    Powerful,I enjoyed this read

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 8:55:00 PM
    "Oh if I should die within this trance My love,my love please spare me this dance." What a wonderful words! Love it. ^__^

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/10/2013 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shirley for your wonderful comment my dear.
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 6:46:00 PM
    Fifty four reads and I'm your first comment, this is such a pitty, you deserve more adoration than this, now that I've said my smeal, going to go paint something beautiful on my canvass, big hugs to you, xxx Rose xxx

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/10/2013 12:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thanks for that wonderful comment Rose...lol.Big hugs to you also.
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Such romance makes me think of chivalry of old where Knighted Warriors rescued their princesses in castles filled with fire dragons at their tails, I guess I watched Shrek, too many a time, smile, I like it xxx

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/10/2013 12:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're funny,thanks for the smiles and those wonderful comments.I'm taken back.