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Below is the poem entitled Life which was written by poet John Ginesi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Life

                              Life

It was God who created the beginning of life
Since man arrived there has been nothing but strife
When the air was fresh and the rivers where clear
The birds and the animals had nothing to fear


Now even in those early times
Man was the one who was committing the crimes
They started wars, they fought and died
Though living in harmony they never tried


Man even tried to replace the horse
With the internal combustion engine of course
Which eventually led to the motor car
A shiny vehicle that would take man far


They split the atom, a shock wave was felt
If man played with uranium the planet might melt
Oh will mankind go to far
Or make a new life near and far.

 
My very first poem - Written in 2000

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  1. Date: 7/29/2013 12:20:00 PM
    THis Was amazing to be your first ! great job #Onelove ~MJB

    Ginesi Avatar John Ginesi
    Date: 7/30/2013 1:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Malcolm, My first one 'Life' needed to be good, I managed best new poem, I entered 2 more, 'Governments' and 'Ship In The Bottle' then left, I composed 12 before stopping, then posted them here, my style has changed these days but not my quality, I aim to deliver good entertainment here, thanks so much. John
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 10:54:00 AM
    I LIKE YOUR FIRST POEM, and the thoughts and emotions you expressed. life has so much to consume... always~ Linda

    Ginesi Avatar John Ginesi
    Date: 6/10/2013 1:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Linda, I thought it was time to reveal my very first poem, it was a rhyming poem as most of my new ones have been narrative, I found that rhyming poems restrict my imagination so I broke from this tradition and created the more straight forward poems, I do have a vivid imagination and I like to write as I feel the inspiration, it seems far more interesting that way. John