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Take the ribbon from my hair

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Take the ribbon from my hair

With the dawning of the day like a fertile vine which creeps amidst the purple hue of Tuscan fields I yield my fruit Before first autumn rain I wait for you Starved like a harvest moon you come to me Silk honey of dusk A shadow descending in the cradle of my arms feeding nectar from my lips repeaning my soul amusing my solitude with blazing fire On scarlet foliage ~your kiss~ In sleep your breath within me ~Dolce vino~ Your fingers on my neck's nape ~Viola in concerto~ In sleep,once again in sleep where eyelids close to the bliss of twilight dew I see you

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  1. Date: 9/4/2013 3:14:00 PM

    WORDS SO VERY BEAUTIFUL FLOATING OF THE PAGE LIKE A BREATH OF CLEAR AIR SWEETLY PLAYS A BREATHTAKING PIECE

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 8:51:00 AM

    this is nice

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 7:14:00 PM

    You are absolutely BLOOMING, Char!...'Take the ribbon from your hair, shake it loose and let it fall'...Oh yes...'Sweet wine' indeed - Tim

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 7:51:00 AM

    Char...such verse takes ones breath away.....thanks for stopping by and glad you could hear me sing!? jimbo

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 1:00:00 AM

    I feel I have been cheated by having never before known the pleasure discovering your talent. What a way to begin the day. I really hope you can take on another avid fan. ... You have left me breathless......Jake

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 11:34:00 PM

    So soft to read, lovely...:):):):)Adarsh

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 3:19:00 PM

    Your beautiful verses never waiver dear girl, I am always charmed by them, have a wonderful day, stay beautiful xxx

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:39:00 PM

    ..............Pss., Returning Unto The Scene Of A Dream Wherein, Her Beauty Dwells ~ Keep Brushing Your Splendours, Beautiful Charmaine And Thank You For Being So Sweet! Truly, A Princess A Queen As All These Wonderful Things; 'Cinderella.' Love, John

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 10:45:00 AM

    taking another serving of this fine morsel.... got more, charma... enjoyed!..:)

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:46:00 PM

    Always a pleasure to read your beautiful romantic poems, which you write so very well, Charma! Beautiful and elegant! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 12:54:00 AM

    I feel like I've been neglectful, Charmaine! Been busy and haven't able to get back with my P-Soup friends... hope we are still friends, lol! If I'm being honest, romance isn't my cup of tea... but you managed to put a nice dreamy quality to this piece that made even an un-romantic like myself read and enjoy. Good job!

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:13:00 PM

    Sweet,romantic poetry here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:11:00 PM

    Sweet,romantic poetry here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 7:43:00 AM

    lovely piece of work.............wow!

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 10:28:00 AM

    Charmaine, you write with such charm, beauty and eloquence. There are so many beautiful lines leading to a wonderful ending. It is a pleasure to read your fine work :)

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 6:24:00 AM

    In sleep your breath within me........ Nice!

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 3:58:00 AM

    Imagery meditation. It remind us to value those in our lives. A beautiful write, Charmaine. Thanks for the greeting on Father's Day. (^_^) Noel

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 8:19:00 PM

    Dear Charmaine, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit As ALWAYS YOUR words ignight the emotions of LOVE buried deep in my Heart. YOUR vivid imagerysoothing to my eyes.Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments on my recent post The boys are chomping at the bit to welcome YOU to the Family I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER -Papa

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 7:09:00 PM

    i like your poem Charma, much respect and peace in the aroma of the twilight due around you. Love the colors in your poem... a sweet poem. .. enjoyed your poem... always~ PD

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 5:16:00 PM

    A dazzling write...kudos. :)

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:52:00 PM

    Glittering intimacy Charmaine - very private, very personal, very lovely - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 2:59:00 PM

    Sorry haven't been around as much lately! Hope you still love me! LOL IBi move next Tuesday and hopefully back on track after that! Hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 12:34:00 PM

    Beautiful poem and steady rhythm. Very well done! Your Italian details are impressive. G.

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 8:17:00 AM

    Dolce vino and viola in concerto are in my language! Nice poem

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Just amazing Charma!This goes to my Favs!

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 12:44:00 AM

    Hello, beautiful....soup mail :)

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 12:11:00 AM

    Ps., I Love Your Picture So Priceless Is, 'Your Beauty.' Have A Very Beautiful Day, Dipped In Love. Love, John

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 7:41:00 PM

    great way of expressing your love. <3

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 6:37:00 PM

    This makes the heart melt into a languid, and totally satisfied puddle........!! Wow......so beautifully sensual!

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 9:35:00 AM

    And I breathe a deep sigh after I read this beauty-- I especially liked the reference to other things as what the touch and kiss can inspire-- you pen romance beautifully, as always dear Charma! Hmm, my memory can suck bigtime I think I vaguely remember you mentioning your Filipina friend-- I am smiling, just imagining visiting you & your family & friends in beautiful Malta... I can dream, right? And we can view a Maltese sunset too :) thank you for always remembering me... hugs to you!

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