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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:34:00 AM
    I love the way you can write sweet poetry even about you failures. Good read Paul...Peter

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 7:02:00 PM
    WOW... brutal honesty of the downsides of love although I see it as absolutely superb poetry :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:07:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetrysoup Paul. May you enjoy the site for years to come. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 5:03:00 AM
    You are strong when you view your weaknesses, Paul - Well written my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    wilson Avatar zebedee wilson
    Date: 6/9/2013 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cheers hun :-) Xx
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 4:45:00 AM
    I enjoy the realism in this piece for so many people experience this far to often great read

    wilson Avatar zebedee wilson
    Date: 6/9/2013 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks :-) glad You liked it Xx
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:56:00 PM
    I read your comment on my comment,, when i welcomed you to the soup... sometimes it is better to leave a comment on my poem page, or soup mail... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:54:00 PM
    Paul, it is sad when a man has so much on his mind... I think me and my x had this problem one time... but why would you embrace your failings... no matter, I admire your poem, and how you embraced a personal moment... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:00:00 PM
    Raw and powerful emotions penned, enjoyed your poetry tonight xxx

    wilson Avatar zebedee wilson
    Date: 6/8/2013 12:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you very much hun :-) xxx
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 7:13:00 PM
    A sad write and the fate of many couples sorry to say. Welcome to Soup Light & Love

    wilson Avatar zebedee wilson
    Date: 6/8/2013 12:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You :-) x