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gypsy dance - new rhyming couplet contest

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gypsy dance - new rhyming couplet contest

Swirling and twirling the gypsy dances
Skirt all askew gaining wanton glances


penned 7/6/2013

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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 7:07:00 PM
    great couplet! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Hi Seren... Good job... Big congrats...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/16/2013 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Chuma .....Seren
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 5:31:00 PM
    super poem super win. *love ~SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/16/2013 12:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SKAT I do appreciate comments ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Seren Supreme! Congrats

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/15/2013 4:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Judy ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Beautiful and nice piece,Seren...Congrats on your classic win...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/15/2013 4:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you OA ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:52:00 PM
    Congrad's Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/15/2013 4:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:50:00 PM
    Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Congratulations, Seren! I love the rhymes and alliteration in this one :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/14/2013 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Heather ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 5:58:00 AM
    congratulations Seren a brilliant no 1

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/14/2013 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy, I am amazed ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 4:15:00 AM
    I love this. Congratulations on your win. Rick

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/14/2013 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick ....Seren
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 12:24:00 AM
    congrats, this is excellent,,,

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/14/2013 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry ..glad you saw it .....Seren
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 8:02:00 PM
    I break into smiles reading this as the imagery is perfect,Seren! Congratulations! Always, Annalise

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/14/2013 12:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Annalise and thank you ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 7:28:00 PM
    Love it! It seems we are both drawn to dancing. Congratulations.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/14/2013 12:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Obviously the winning formula ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:54:00 PM
    I love yours, lady!!! Congrats.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/13/2013 6:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow thank you Andrea, where did that piece of brilliance come from haha will go and try and find where ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Wonderful- those gypsies! congrats. BG

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/13/2013 6:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you BG even i liked it ....Seren
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Hi Seren - I recall seeing a famous painting of gypsies dancing...Is that what inspired this poem?...Regardless, you have painted a beautiful and vivid picture here...Congratulations on your top spot - Tim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/13/2013 6:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tim to be totally honest i dont know where I dragged this one up from, I wish I did ....Seren
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 2:54:00 PM
    I really love this. Dance of language. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/13/2013 3:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Conne, thank you for the congrats.....Seren
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 10:01:00 AM
    Seren I am thrilled for you congrats and such a jewel of a couplet Shadow x

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/13/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shadow I am amazed ....Seren
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Love the imagery, Seren! Love, Kim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/8/2013 12:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kim ....Seren
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 3:11:00 PM
    this one is really picturesque for me. I love to see them dance!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/8/2013 12:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, yes they make a colourful sight....Seren
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