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Traces

Bound by your presence
A torture to erase,
You have taken, 
a piece of my existance
That cannot be salvaged.

In this cold winters night
Numbness, crys me to sleep.
Dont wake me from, this slumber
For its my only, peace.

A silent cry, I weep.
A fallen tear, that speaks.
A lonely heart, that mourns
Lingers in my speech.

Im not sober in existence
But transparent, in my flesh.
A abandoned spirit,
Now occupies, my emptiness.

contest. Greatly missed
Posted 6/6/2013

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:09:00 PM
    This is a very touching and moving piece of poetry. Full of imagery and imagination. Good job

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Cherie, , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 9/12/2013 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi linda thanks so much, 4 commenting....appreciate it:0)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:50:00 PM
    Congrats on your featured poem on the home page my friend. A really moving piece! Applause!!!

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/30/2013 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi M,,,thanks so much I, was pretty surpised,,, a real nice feeling:) always thankful for your lovely comments m:) xoxo cherie
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:35:00 PM
    "Top 100 Recent" congratulations. A very moving poem. "A abandoned spirit, Now occupies, my emptiness." Excellent ending to complete the picture of abandonment :)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/30/2013 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi karen, im surprised I didnt know it was in top 100 recent ,,,i. Truly appreciate you telling me that & thanks so much for your, generous comment it really made my day, im all smiles lol:0) big hugz ...ty again:0) ~<3~ cherie
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:28:00 PM
    the only place i love is peace. this is awesome piece....write more...

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/26/2013 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Neldy, yes definetly need peace:) so true. Love your comment thankyou so much I will:) blessings always cherie.
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Very moving and sad, touching and beautiful. Great write. Congratulation on your poem being featured this week, With love..... Ellie

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/26/2013 6:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ellie, thanks so much for your kind comment, truly appreciate your lovely comment:) cherie
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem being featured this week.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/26/2013 6:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Dr Ram.Mehta, thanks so much , appreciate your comment, Cherie...:0)
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Very sad poem here. I must say that its explosive with imagery to my eyes. Please keep posting!!!

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 6/10/2013 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much ink u script, thanks for your kind encouraging words....xx cherie
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 3:04:00 AM
    So touching and terrific. Your are such a talent. How love issues push out poetry in the depth of men. It's great to read your piece this morning, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. PoetrySoup is a pleasant platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 6/8/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi adeleke, appreciate, your very kind comment. Thanks for all the great info & warm welcome....:)
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Cherie, a touching poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 6/8/2013 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks very much Anne, appreciate your kind comment and yes will definitely read your poems...:0)
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 7:57:00 AM
    Sad but true reality of love lost-- the title is unique to the theme-- "Traces". Nice write. Welcome to P/Soup

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 6/8/2013 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Kim Thankyou also for your warm welcome, appreciate it very much...
    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 6/8/2013 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks very much, for commenting, really appreciate it..:)