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THE SUN

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Below is the poem entitled THE SUN which was written by poet Olivia Nimley. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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THE SUN

I will aim for the sun
I will struggle to reside in the sky
I will face the toughest storms
I will stand firm when the wind blows

I will focus on the light from above
I will open my dark places to be lighten
I will forget the mistakes of my past
I will rely on the light that shines forever

I will plant new trees for the sun is available
I will weed out the intruder from my soil
I will clean my farm for speedy germination
I will smile as my sun watches me harvest each day.



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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:07:00 PM
    OLIVIA, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Olivia, a beautiful poem radiating hopeful inspiration. Reading the winning poems in the contests today. You realy are a winner here :)

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:23:00 PM
    Olivia congratulations on your outstanding win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Lovely and Beautiful piece,Nice presentation...Congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 12:21:00 PM
    Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Congratulations, Olivia on your first place. What an inspiring poem you have written! Nature nourishes everything under the sun, and you appreciate it and take care of it. I wish you success and happiness. Peace & Love, Andrew.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:19:00 PM
    congrats on your 1st place win xxx

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/27/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the compliments.
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 5:54:00 PM
    Awesome inspirational verse, Olivia! Congratulations on your wonderful Ist Place win! Always, Annalise

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/27/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    To inspire is my priority . Keep following my writings
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 4:07:00 PM
    This is awesome...so positive...congratulations on your top winning poem...

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/27/2013 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for enjoying my inspire message
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 3:38:00 PM
    lovely congrats on your win

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/27/2013 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Shadow, thanks for appreciating my poem
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Olivia, welcome and congratulations!! Love how you compared life to a garden.

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/27/2013 8:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Craig, thanks for the compliments. you will get a better one from me some other time.
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Hello Olivia, your poem was stunning, and I fully enjoyed what you had to offer... CONGRATULATIONS!!! you rock... luv~ PD

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/27/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will always love to contribute to poetry soup but it a unfortunate i can not be a premium member because there is no means to pay my membership fees. i have the money but in my country we don't use the credit card system. If poetrysoup could consider me paying through money order like western union.
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 2:14:00 PM
    Lovely inspiration! Congratulations, Olivia!

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/27/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Carrie, thanks for appreciating my poem. and i know the sun will shine in your favor.
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 3:03:00 AM
    Very nice write, I enjoyed, thank you

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/27/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi peter, thanks for appreciating my poem