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This Life I detest

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Below is the poem entitled This Life I detest which was written by poet Gabe Shelly. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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This Life I detest

This Life I detest
For Happiness only comes in moments now.
We have done so many things...
"But what is bad or good that thinking makes it so..."
Maybe it is I who is changing color--
Still I so want to point the finger


                                        6/1/'13

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 1:22:00 PM
    Simply so. Loved it.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Ah another depressive soul. You expressed yourself well. So many of us feel the same

    Shelly Avatar Gabe Shelly
    Date: 6/19/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you. gabe
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 4:13:00 PM
    I likes the ending, we always want to have someone to blame , I enjoyed this write Gabe, ~always, Linda

    Shelly Avatar Gabe Shelly
    Date: 6/8/2013 6:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda. gabe