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I Fear The Dreams - - -

I Fear The Dreams - - - Vivid dreams--dreams in bright Technicolor Recurring over and over, each night unfolding Deep I plunge into the oblivion of empty space And I am free falling, tumbling, plummeting Again, once more I do the same things within I am the girl with long raven hair flowing And the man is there beckoning for me--come He stands with arms outstretched, oh my darling But who is this man--his face is unknown My mind is swirling, twirling and I am screaming He leads me and we walk into the unknown Through tangled vines and lush trees drooping I fear him--what does he want, I cry out Why does he come each night--whispering Each night I fear closing my tired eyes For I know that the man will be there, waiting June 5, 2013 For the contest, Poems To Keep You Awake At Night

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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 10:45:00 AM

    Constance, what a perfectly constructed poem and just what Roy was asking for!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 3:58:00 AM

    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 7:01:00 PM

    This would be so terrifying.......one would never be willing to close her eyes!!

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:06:00 PM

    congrats in Roy's contest............. SKAT

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:22:00 PM

    Wow there are some scary people about . well done Constance ,congratulations on your place love xx

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 12:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win. I'll be posting a blog with additional comments. Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 9:09:00 PM

    That is a very scary nightmare my friend, I had dreams like that when I was younger, ones that just wouldn't go away, and they weren't normal nightmares...they seemed so real! You know when you are young (and even when you are older at times), dreams seem to take on a whole new life, they seem to breathe and live as a part of you! I'll never forget a string of years when I had a debilitating nightmare every night! I was terrified to sleep! This is a phenomenal poem my friend, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 1:04:00 PM

    nice flow