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REOPENING OF THE SCHOOL

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REOPENING OF THE SCHOOL

First day to school is very good for children like us, very cool.
We meet our new friends and old one’s too,
But we don’t know we should catch whom.
Children are excited to know the teacher,
As they need a good future.
 We come to know the rules of school,
So that we do not work according to us like fools.
We share our tiffins and tell our feelings,.
We ask last year’s percentage ,
To know whether the child is of good stage. 
We give our introduction lovingly,
So that everyone may know us clearly.
There is nothing to study much as its first day, full of fun.
We go home hand in hand ,
To remain life long friends….
 

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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 4:03:00 PM

    Hi Nishita, i picked this one last cause you have it down as a haiku............ the form is free verse. but, as a new poet you will get the hang of it. After reading all your poems, I figure you love school, LOL, and you are in your late teens..... and it's going to be an honor reading all your poems, so please post another poem.......... luv SKAT

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Well done! Great use of imagery here.- Edward

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 7:09:00 AM

    - A new experience and new friends - Well written, nice to read your poem today. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 4:10:00 PM

    youth is such a fragile stage to have friends and have no worries, never let that go cause one day you'll wake up and your best days were those good ole school days, enjoyed ~always, Linda

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 9:28:00 AM

    I can imagine what your first day at school was like. Keep writing

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 7:12:00 AM

    hi Nishita, ur poem is good but i doubt about the structure ur poem. i mean the format of haiku, very confusing the meter of ur poem, it should be 5/7/5 but this is good just to read the content. have a great day...Elai

    Karulkar Avatar Nishita Karulkar Date: 6/6/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hie elai.. i really respect your comment... n wil luk towards d structure in d next of my poems.. thnk u soo much.. have a great day.. take care :)