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  1. Date: 6/6/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Great visuals. I could smell them as if they were right in front of me... smelling the carnations as you're about to enter battle is a very captivating image.

    Rigoler Avatar Maurice Rigoler
    Date: 6/6/2013 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    In Persian culture the carnation was a symbol of masculinity, etc. Artaxerxes was a king mentioned in the Bible. Remnants of Persepolis still exist today.