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festal dance

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festal dance


The mirror's image was a thought and wraith
their solemn instances to reproduce
Fall's auburn pictures of October eighth,
became in air the leafage of white spruce,

Her face diffused on an abandoned field
where solitude reminded of her smile,
advancing night on crayon black had sealed
their song the ferns recalled and distant isle.

The train advanced where its repeated thud
exchanged the fading lights for night's dark glance;
was their abandoned symphony's ballad
- embellished synthesis and festal dance?

Evanescent the train surpassed his stare
- befalling were the stars like vows of e'er.

© G.V. 06-03-2013 All rights reserved
(This poem has never been in a contest before.)



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  1. Date: 1/21/2014 7:05:00 PM

    Dreamy, Giorgio. Enjoyed the visuals as well as your writing style. Congrats and poetic hugs!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/22/2014 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Juliet. :) G.
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 3:19:00 PM

    Giorgio, good use of form and good contrast between the stanzas. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/19/2014 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is a perfect sonnet, too. Iambic Pentameter.
    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/19/2014 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.
  1. Date: 11/24/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Giorgio, very lovely evocative sonnet, enjoyed reading it.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/5/2014 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sheri.
  1. Date: 8/10/2013 1:51:00 PM

    Thank you friends!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 10:47:00 AM

    Georgio, this is a breathtaking sonnet! Full of interesting language and whimsical imagery :)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/5/2014 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sheri.
    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/5/2014 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Heather!
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 7:45:00 AM

    These words sound very well to me, although my Knowledge of the language is not completely familiar to me and I have to interpret the meaning in my language. Rhymes are perfect and I appreciate much this poem. My road toward writing good english poems is still long!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/5/2014 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mario!
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 6:00:00 AM

    what a flowing song with colorful artwords and graceful feel... i like the rhythmic wave as well; lovely autumn leaves ever drifting.. thanks for your visit... this is a 7 as well..:) hugggs

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/5/2014 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you nette.
  1. Date: 6/4/2013 12:29:00 PM

    What beautiful language, especially, "their song the ferns had sung on dreamers' aisle. Always a pleasure to find your poems.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/5/2014 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you SuZ!