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dont take BULLSHIT

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Below is the poem entitled dont take BULLSHIT which was written by poet PARIVARTANA SINGH. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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dont take BULLSHIT

everytym u tel me dt u nvr gonna change..
bt baby u hv forgot dt 2 faces of cards can tame...
everytym u told me u nevr gonna lie...
bt baby u shud knw dt telin a truth cn be a sign of gudbye...

everytym u told me i wl protct u frevr...
bt baby u shud tk care it dsnt convrtd into possesive nature...
evrytym u told me i wl nevr leave u alone...
bt baby u shud knw dat i nvr wntd 2 live alwaz in ur cyclone...

evrytym u told me i wl bring u gifts and surprises..
bt baby u shud knw dt honesty hs nw taken as a trashes...
evrytym u told me u dt u wl nt gv any chance 2 lt me say...
bt baby u shud knw dt ds poem z 4 u nt for any gay...

though i hv been vry faithful towards u evrytym..
bt u hv taken it as a game of gta vice city crime...
smtyms i jst wnt u 2 shut al bul*****n leave me alone..
bt baby ds brkup status pullin me inside again jst lyk thrown.

since i hope guys u undrstood d problm of ds fake wrld..
dnt take love as a challenge becoz it always turns u in blindfold..
evryone cnnt be prfct so show ur real n dnt turn it into a myth..
so peeps fill lyf wid flowrs jst dnt take bullshit.....

love pari

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 6:21:00 PM
    I love the emotional content of this poem! It is very powerful. Try to write out your words So that the reader can flow trow your poem easier, this will make your words a lot more affective! Sometimes abbreviations take away felling from a poem. Hakim

    Date: 10/21/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thnx hakim...i accept ur wrds n wud apply further....thnx 4 postin :) :)
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 6:14:00 AM
    HMMMMMM well written !

    Date: 10/21/2013 7:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thnku sir :) :)