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Take One More Breath

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Take One More Breath

My bedroom walls are closing in
The white paint seems to taunt me as I wonder how to escape
The posters on my wall no longer offer comfort but repetition
As the paper thin eyes staring down on me cause more confusion

Fool for waiting and hoping to be accepted
Fool for trying to please those who have no limitation on their desires
Fool for chasing down a path that doesnt exist
Fool for letting others take away your dreams

Sunlight flickers past the curtain as heat fills the air
Stepping outside may lead to the end
Searching for answers that could stay hidden forever
But I choose to breathe
I choose to live

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  1. Date: 6/5/2013 4:40:00 AM
    You seemed to capture depression perfectly in this well penned write. I feel like I could definitely relate to this; nice choice in choosing to breathe and to live. I face this everyday. Nice job on this!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 8:31:00 AM
    Excellent poem on raw emotions and the entrapment of depression and choices to keep on.. keeping on. Welcome to P/Soup