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  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:43:00 PM
    very good write,,, was in Texas for a summer. My friend jumped into a ditch. She was born and raised there. I'm in Calif.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 5:41:00 AM
    I like the energy and emotions portrayed in this one Donna.Like Timothy and Becca I'm not familiar with tornados but thanks for the succinct glimpse into it my dear.

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 12:28:00 PM
    Tornadoes aren't common where I'm from... but you've captured the feeling of it and put me in your shoes. Like Becca it has intrigued me as well... but I suppose to people that are used to having them around it's really not all that "cool" anymore... Hope you guys stay safe!!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:18:00 PM
    Indication of auguries beautifully adorned and what happens to one who feels the impending danger. Well done here. Loved always,bl

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 3:06:00 PM
    I can't begin to imagine what's it's like to see a tornado approaching! YIKES! Mother Nature can be so sweet but at the same time be OH SO CRUEL! Stay safe dear Donna... we pray for you guys down there! Big hugs, and much love, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:50:00 PM
    I live right smack in the middle of it!! I've seen many up close...too close! It's freaky to be so helpless in the face of something so powerful. But hey, you can't fight just gotta dance with em.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 8:36:00 AM
    My goodness, I was taken in to the point of fear! The closest I have come to a Tornado! Impressive, dynamic, real!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:13:00 AM
    Excellent. Sometime nature turns cruel. Can not be stopped either. Nice write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 1:38:00 PM
    Sorry to hear you are part of this sad tale. It is very sad to hear about the back to back tornados and the loss of life. Prayers from Canada.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/2/2013 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard....
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 11:28:00 AM
    ohh, a multi-layered piece so detailed and laced with all the grumblimgs of nature's wrath... superb enjambment of images..:) huggs

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/2/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Appreciate that nette .....
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 9:17:00 AM
    So you were part of the storms too. All Oklahomans are. I don't know about you, but we spent the better part of a night in a backyard shelter, listening to the rain, hail and occasional tree branches hiting the door. We now keep our survival kit at hand. You've captured it nicely, especial the green sky. I hope you are well and safe... Jack

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/2/2013 6:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You too safe....hopefully the worst will be over in a few more weeks for this year yeah?????
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 4:18:00 PM
    WOW! The forces of nature can turn cruel, MD! Please do take any precautions that you can. This poem brought me right along with you and made the hair on my neck stand as well! Take care, dearie!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/1/2013 7:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Will best I can...and with Gods blessing...thanks for stopping....
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 3:10:00 PM
    wow, donna, this is AWESOME writing. You live here?? EEEEKKKS. a big fave on this one.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/1/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Andrea right in the great big middle of central Oklahoma where it happens all the time...I've been in too many to count...but God has been good to spare my.. family so far except a cousin who had her leg cut off from flying debris...and minor damage..thanks for the comment..:-) and fav!
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 12:46:00 PM
    We have seen a tornado, a very scary moment in our life! If I had my say in it I would never want to see one, they are terrible events in life! I am enthralled by the splendor of this splendid poem! I really enjoyed reading this awesome write this afternoon! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/1/2013 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey should be here when the pressure of one going over sucks the water out of the toilets back up in the pipes...weird......
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 10:57:00 AM
    And very good write. I've seen a couple of tornadoes in my life time. Nature is a very powerful force.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/1/2013 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes sir....thanks Rick.....