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Haikus 54

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Haikus 54



	Haikus 54
	
	parking lot romance
	soaking wet smoochy kisses
	far too many clothes
	
	a wet asphalt bed
	not in the Kama Sutra
	do it anyway


These were written for photo #1 in PD’s “Kissing in the Rain”
contest, but I missed the deadline. Oh well...

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  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Just the mention of the Kama Sutra...

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/16/2013 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree... Jack
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 11:06:00 PM
    Sorry, you missed the deadline... a fine kiss, for the folks in this haiku.... xox...PD

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/12/2013 11:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm sorry too. I'm more watchful now...
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 10:16:00 PM
    I think this would have done well, but happy you posted anyway. I felt many others were a bit too dramatic with descriptions while this one had a lighter touch that I find more appealing.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 6/6/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. To tell the truth I was surprised by the seriousness of the winning entries. I took the description of PD's contest to be humorous, but clearly many did not. Oh well... And so it is.
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:57:00 PM
    sorry you missed the wagon!! But you got some nice little poems out of it, my friend.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 6/2/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks... I lost track of the deadline, but I did have a fine time writing these two.
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 9:24:00 AM
    Well, though u didn't reach the deadline for me it's very nice! great romance! ...keep safe always...,Elai

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 6/1/2013 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Elai. I'll be more mindful next time.. Jack
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 8:09:00 AM
    too graphic for my taste but I think you've achieved your goal good poem.

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Well I loved them......and think they would have placed....

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/31/2013 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. I had others in mind, but then I took the weekend off, and...