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Something Stirring

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Something Stirring

As night descends, casting darkness
all is silent and so very still
waiting, listening, and breathless

Into the dark of nights coldness
do you feel it, that stone cold chill
as night descends, casting darkness

The cold seeping chilling  denseness
it seems to invade , to instill
waiting, listening, and breathless

Something  stirring in the blackness
the noises now loud and so shrill
as night descends, casting darkness 

Death shows his face full of graveness
in the dark stands waiting to kill
waiting, listening and breathless 

Now life seeps away, its painless
just a gasp then it flees noiseless
as night descends, casting darkness
waiting, listening and breathless


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  1. Date: 5/29/2013 5:08:00 PM

    You can almost feel the grip of death-waiting, watching . Nicely done on this poem. love phyl

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/30/2013 4:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty Phyllis suspense is a great tool lol ty for kind remarks Linda
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:38:00 PM

    Very nice! Terry

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/29/2013 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Terry and ty happed you like it Linda
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 8:17:00 AM

    Gripping tone here! I like this! I enjoyed the consistent build-up. :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/29/2013 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Drake ty dear I did my job then lol the build up so important glad you felt it Linda