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A SECOND CHANCE

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A SECOND CHANCE


She clutched a glimpse of blinking reverie yet now, through stardust flushing out the light it slid, languished; washed by the grains of time on pathways where love had been slashed in half unearthing all the weeds of cycles bleak. From thinning mists that hang on her dim eyes the finest consolations from his leave were comfort, songs and roots of joy well glazed; and though a dull heart bore as twilight fell she prayed their charmed flames would ignite; again. Heather Ober's 10 Lines Contest * Blank verse, not to be confused with free verse, has a set metrical pattern. It is traditionally written in iambic pentameter, unryhmed. by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 6/7/2013 10:39:00 AM

    Nette, Congratulations on your well deserved win in Heather’s contest, this is full of great images!

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:38:00 AM

    this is a nice poem... Congratulations... Linda

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 7:02:00 AM

    congratulations nette xx

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 12:37:00 AM

    Congrats Ate Nette! ^A^

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 4:32:00 PM

    Congratulations, nette, on your big win here...a well-constructed example of blank verse.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:18:00 PM

    Nette, you took my breath away with this one! Wonderful job, and congratulations on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 12:57:00 PM

    You never need a second chance. First time is always a charming poem!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 4:24:00 PM

    Nette: Congratulations! Thank you for a very good one. :) G.

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 4:23:00 PM

    great write.

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 10:21:00 AM

    True heart waits till ends. Lovely done my friend. Thanks......,always, bl

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:29:00 PM

    Very well penned. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:10:00 PM

    Another amazing poem from you Nette!Lovely read.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 10:39:00 AM

    God is also a God of second changes...lovely ending to this poem, Nette!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 10:02:00 AM

    A phantasmagoria of images and expressions that dazzle the mind! Excellent!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 9:27:00 AM

    I believe in second chances for some even third and forth. I enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 8:07:00 AM

    This is a wonderfully expressive write my friend! You have brought to me a life of wonderment and amazement with this tremendous poem! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Very touching. A strengthened need for the familiar. This was excellent.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:36:00 AM

    - Today's beautiful poem from my friend Nette. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 6:34:00 AM

    This sounds like a poem between dreams and reality, enjoyed this Nette, first poem I read this morning, a great way to start my day, now I can take you with me, as my badge of inspiration for the day, take care, God bless, xxx V