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  1. Date: 9/4/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Very touching and emotional poem, Dan! Nice flow to your words here. Well done! I enjoyed reading it...You might enjoy my poem titled, "If I Died Now". It has a similar theme to this one....Also, thank you for reading my poem, "Alone", and for the nice comments. I appreciate it!

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Dan, I think was rings true in your poem that everyone can relate to is the need to be recognized...validation if you will. I have had similar thoughts. Good job. Allan

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 8:36:00 AM
    So gently written... and so engulfing in our thoughts... We lingered there with you... May you and yours life in safety and love...

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Dear Dan, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit I think maybe this POEM was whispered in YOUR ear in an out of body moment Superb Quill I Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comment on my recent POEM. I am having computer problems and am at the Library (Time Limit) but I will Soup Mail YOU soon LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Well written Interesting how we all seem to wonder about our funeral. What will be said about us? Who really wants to know?

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:28:00 AM
    Hi Dan see you have been away a while me to, so nice to catch up with you again, really enjoyed this heart felt write, have a good week, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Hi Dan, i think its great the way it is, a great pondering write of being an eye witness at your own grave, blessings my friend ,Carl

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Dan, this is a warm, heartfelt eulogy that hopefully won't be read for another 50 years! You are unique! Hugs

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 4:27:00 PM
    I enjoyed that piece

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 1:09:00 AM
    Is this the way you want it to be ? I've always said " don't cry" just have a party. So my lost Boys reminds you of "YOU" ;} I like the grassy hill ;}

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 11:01:00 PM
    Lake of the Ozarks where Aprils ashes be.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 4:26:00 AM
    To embrace the idea of mortality without looking forward it is a sign of healthy attitude! Profound thinking! Excellent work! Yesterday I wrote on the subject. Look at MY LIBERATOR when time is abundant! thank you!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:21:00 AM
    - A good thought ... but, not today ... tomorrow, next week, next month, next year ..... but, far into the future ... when your time comes. - Nice poem, Dan! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)