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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 5/29/2013 9:43:00 AM
    A sad emotional write and glad it is only made up. I did one like this and had a few people ask me what happened but it was only fiction. You rhyme this so perfectly that it has such a smooth flow as you read it. Awesome write. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Very emotional and romantic. I am basking in the warm glow of your words.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 5:11:00 AM
    This is a wonderful and creative write! You rhyme perfectly within this write, it flowed so wondrously, I was extremely impressed my friend! You did a masterful job on this piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:18:00 PM
    I feel your feels Gail. We seem to never forget those we once loved. And some, well, maybe we will always have a certain 'love' for even though they're gone.

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 4:22:00 PM
    Lovely, heartfelt write, Gail. Without your telling the reader it's a made-up poem I would have easily believed this to be a true account. Well done and good luck in the contest, my friend. :-)