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Crimson Fall

Drips down my head
Looking at the sky
Bright and red

Slow and just still
Here waiting
And so I will

Falling on the asphalt
Drip, drip, drip
Slowly tearing my heart

Mother nature
I'm torn and crying
Don't leave me asunder


5/24/2013	
Rain, rain, rain Contest Entry.


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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 7:56:00 PM
    lost in rain3x contest. sucks bigtime

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 12:29:00 AM
    very nicely done ;} Under the dome starts Mon. June 24 CBS. My daughter gave me the book,,,,watch preview on Utube ;}

    Calubiran Avatar Nato Calubiran
    Date: 5/30/2013 1:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok thanks. gonna check it out later.
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..I had not heard the song "Laura" so I looked it up..My poem was about my biological mother who died and left me 15 months old, a son 6 years old, a son 9 or 11 years old, a son around 16 and another son 19 to 21 years old..By todays longevity she died way too young...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Calubiran Avatar Nato Calubiran
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    did you like the song, Think of Laura? its one of my oldies song favorites, also other songes by Bread
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 8:53:00 AM
    awesome poem friend Nato...thanks for passing by...have a nice day :)

    Calubiran Avatar Nato Calubiran
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    God bless in future writings. Good day Paz
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 5:00:00 AM
    Hi Nato, raining here in Wales also, but it is brightening so sun on its way.....Nice poem good luck ...Seren

    Calubiran Avatar Nato Calubiran
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for stopping by. have a nice day
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:12:00 AM
    Full of anguish and pain...well expressed. Hope the sun comes out soon! :)

    Calubiran Avatar Nato Calubiran
    Date: 5/27/2013 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    nah it's still rainy season here in the Philippines. I hope it stops raining soon