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Rain rain rain - contest

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Rain rain rain - contest

Whats that i hear
Someone, something calling out for me
I  am way up here in the  clouds
Will try and reach you soon

Its getting so dark up here
I am bursting , poof I am  free
Look up I am on my way
Sorry I am so cold, enjoy me

The flowers and the trees are shaking
Pleasure and desire all theirs
I am the giver and taker of life
I am Rain no one can live without me.


27 May 2013

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 8:15:00 PM
    we both lost on this contest, sadly. (/>_<)/ _|__|_

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Never mind Nato its nice to read the winning entries....Seren
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 4:08:00 AM
    A lovely read, a feeling of wanderlust to feel free the beauty of reuniting with someone or to something else. Thank you also for a wonderful comment to my poem. (^_^) Noel.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oops left out the words Thank You
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/28/2013 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Noel, for stopping by and commenting ...Seren
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:08:00 AM
    Nice poem. the importance of rain, lovely. I also joined this contest, my entry is "Crimson Fall". Best of lucks to both of us.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/28/2013 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Nato will go and read your entry Thanks for stopping by ..Seren
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 5:30:00 AM
    I just love the perspective you took for this contest! That was a very awesome way to write a poem, cleverly done my friend! I love this amazing piece Seren, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/27/2013 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Russell ...Seren